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Review of chapter "Let’s Make A Deal" from draconis
Review:
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Sorry it took so long to review, but I'd lost track of the story and didn't realize it had been finished.

The ending was a bit too abrupt and simplified...but I AM very glad you brought the story to a controlled conclusion.
Would have liked to have seen:
-Buffy's personalities become a bit more integrated and how they finally ended up interacting,
-Resolving Buffy's missing memories of Dawn (possibly involving Dr. Strange?)
-Resolution of the Xander--Buffy v. Faith issue,
-More interaction with more Xmen before you jumped to the end.

Overall, a good story with excellent detail.
Comments from author:
I agree it would have been nice to explore the things you mention but my muse for the story had run its course. The way I left it allows for a sequel to come about that very well could explore those topics while still giving a glimpse of how things end up. The XBF issue is the one that gave me the most problems which is why I left that up in the air as well though the decision point was spelled out. I probably would have had to flip a coin to resolve it. May still have to if I ever return to the story.

Thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy some of my other stories.
Review By [draconis] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Anniversary" from raxadian
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if they had involved the X-men, no Slayer would have needed to die, damn PTB.
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Well, Magneto being on that list would be worrisome.
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It means Dawn was inserted in their life.
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I hope they don't move back to Sunnyhell.
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Glory vs the X-men? Oh she is going down!
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i guess that guy was from S.H.I.E.L.D?
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Is a decent plan, too bad those two will probably en in a military jail for a while.
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Yeah, read the files mister.
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I like this version of Hill and she is a shame she isn't in other stories.
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Ah, politics.
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Nice, she is whole at last.
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Looks like Little B is in a lot of pain.
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Review of chapter "Inner Musings" from raxadian
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Still, if Xander and Buffy end together it will be because of what they did to Buffy.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End of the Day" from raxadian
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I wonder if Faith will have more dreams?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Not Rated
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