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Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Scathach
Review:
I thought it was wonderfully written, though I've always been a fan of happy endings. :)
Comments from author:
Aw thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

I'm the complete opposite! I always love the tragic endings lol. It was difficult for me to write cause I love the B/H pairing and felt so bad for taking him away from her like that, but it had to be done. The real book ending was a bit too fairytale for me, so I wanted to do more of a realistic ending :)
Review By [Scathach] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Encounter With a Wizard" from pipertolkien
Review:
Yaay! They met Dumbledore! It's so exciting that Buffy is going to go to England. But I am sad that the gang can't go with her.
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Questions and Answers" from pipertolkien
Review:
That was great. Buffy's going to England, I am so excited! =) And no Giles' "English" was not distracting. LOL I am officially hooked on this story. =)
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Unexpected Visitor" from pipertolkien
Review:
I love the fact that you made it so Faith didn't go bad. And the fact that she is Buffy's friend still. I hated the fact that Faith went bad in the BTVS. Anyways I couldn't stop laughing. Hilariously written! =)
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from pipertolkien
Review:
Excellent way to start a story. I love the fact that Harry was having a dream about Buffy.
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from winnie
Review:
Well worth the time to read this
Review By [winnie] • Date [21 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from TheHunter
Review:
u were right the ending was tragic
story...excellent
plot...amazing
the only real thing i c u need 2 work on is spelling other then that u did great
Review By [TheHunter] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrivals and Introductions" from TheHunter
Review:
so far so good
Review By [TheHunter] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Awesome ending to an awesome story! I have to say, I liked the end. Definitely sad, but very fitting I think. I can't wait to read another story from you :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from aforestgrew
Review:
I think it was a successful ending, though sad. It adds a level of realism to the story. Anyway, I liked it, but I noticed this major error:


“Avada Kadavra!”

“Protego!” Draco yelled, causing Buffy to spin around just as a jet of bright green light smashed into and invisible barrier directly in front of her face.


The killing curse (spelled Avada Kedavra) is only able to be blocked by physical objects, never magic. It wouldn't be such a horrible curse if people could just throw up a shield and avoid it.
Comments from author:
Oh, huh. That makes sense, but I never really connected the dots. Thanks for letting me know. I probably won't change it cause it's not a really huge part of the chapter, but I'm glad you told me!
Review By [aforestgrew] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from gigi
Review:
Well if that was really the ending, then I'm pleasantly surprised. I thought you would have had her end up with Harry in some great big happy ending. I'm glad you didn't, mostly because I'm not a Buffy/Harry shipper, but also because it wasn't something typical. Kudos to you for a great story.
Review By [gigi] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Final Showdown" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Wow, I can't believe you killed off Harry! I really did think it was going to be Buffy. Great chapter even though you left us with a cliffy :( I really can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens in the aftermath. Keep up the good work and update soon :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophetic Dreams" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Wow, you really are moving this whole thing right along! Love the story still :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Chosen Two" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
I fell behind on this story so I've just reread everything form the beginning again. Absolutely superb! I can't believe you don't have a thousand reviews already. Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see how ticked Voldemort will be when he discovers that Buffy really was faking it all. Bet he'll be sooo mad. Two thumbs up ;)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Final Showdown" from (Recent Donor)mpop
Review:
GOD! I hate cliffhangers.

Other than that the chapter was great though.
Review By [(Recent Donor)mpop] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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