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Review of chapter "Vicuña's Search" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [24 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vicuña's Search" from Selonianth
Review:
It's good that this is developing more of a... how should I say this, storylike feel to it. Before it felt interesting but there was no way to actually get into it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Yeah, among other things, it was too heavily italicized and had in-line translations before the rewrite. Also in the early chapters everyone's way too passive... Even the Shadowmen and the Quechan priest are basically reacting to changes in their environment by forces beyond their control. Not sure that'll get much better any time soon. Any suggestions? :)
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vicuña's Life" from Selonianth
Review:
Well then, Slayers just got a hellova lot harder to kill.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vicuña's Life" from SAK
Review:
Please update again Soon!
Review By [SAK] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vicuña's Life" from Dragonelf
Review:
I am already looking forward to read new chapters.

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sineya and the Hunter" from SAK
Review:
This is very good but I'am looking forward to the effects on present day Slayers eg Buffy, Kendra and Faith.

Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks... Sorry it took me three-point-five months to update

#6&7 will be about a trek across Central America by two minor female characters from the show, with a guest appearence by a monster from 'Angel'.
#8 should be the introduction of the mayor and the founding of Sunnydale.
#9-19 will deal with events in Europe and Canada as caused by major and minor characters from Marvel and Buffyverse.
#20 should be where Buffy and her first Watcher come in, so the story's still has a long way to before it catches up with the present...

Well, here's hoping I can keep things interesting :)
Review By [SAK] • Date [4 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sineya and the Hunter" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice, but confusing. Please write more.
Comments from author:
I absolutely will :D

Hmm, thanks, I'm working on tightening my descriptions... Seems I still have a long ways to go :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sineya and the Hunter" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
Again interesting back story. I'm guessing the next chapter will give a little more detail as to why the Elders did what they did, and what would become of the Hunter.

I'm looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
It does, in both respects. A bit more so than it did this morning, as I've added some detail...

Thank you. I hope I can deliver good quality consistently :)
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sineya and the Hunter" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
Very interesting. I like the past that you have given here. And I'm looking forward to how you are going to tie in the Slayer mythology/verse.

So the Hunter is very Logan-ish? Is it Logan or another mutant like Logan?

Great job!
Comments from author:
Thanks :D

In a less demon-filled world, he'd be Logan's aka James Howlett's ancestor. I've tried to get the powers to match up, but I might be off somewhere...

I don't think I'll closely follow what happens to Sineya, but I'll definitely cover the adventures of another Slayer before I enter Spike's time period :)

As far as Logan goes he'll likely pop up during the Gold Rush Era... But I don't think he'll quite be 'James Howlett' this time through :D
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sineya and the Hunter" from SAK
Review:
I like this so far so please update regally.
Comments from author:
Good to hear :)

Heh. As part of the TtH100, I need to have a new Chapter posted every 14 days, or get kicked out of the running. I just had 13 days pass between the posting of #2 and #3, but most should take about a week ;)
Review By [SAK] • Date [25 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sineya and the Hunter" from Iceflame
Review:
Interesting premise there! I'm definately going to be following this set of ficlets!
Comments from author:
Thankies :D

It'll take me a while but for once I not only know where I'm going, but how to get there - and how to have fun doing it :)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [23 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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