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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from banner
Review:
This is a fascinating concept. The Key is timeless - why not have precognitive visions? I hope you come back to this one.
Review By [banner] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
I like the story so far. Would love to see where you go with it :)
Comments from author:
I am coming with a new chapter, this one I even have half the new chapter finished, it's just finishing the rest of the chapter....

Thanks for the review, sorry for the long wait.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from blackroze
Review:
Hi love the story and its a great start . plz continue ow and can ur start hogwarts soon
new fan
Review By [blackroze] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
Wow, that was very good. I actually started tearing up towards the ending of chapter two. I feel for Dawn.
Comments from author:
Thank you!!
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from lilcutie
Review:
please continue this story it is really interesting
Comments from author:
I'm-a-working on the next chapter now. Hopefully it'll be up soon.

:D
Review By [lilcutie] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sani
Review:
Interesting beginning, I love a good buffy/snape beginning. Cant wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. More is coming. Hopefully soon. Just as soon as I can finally get some sleep. LOL.

Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [sani] • Date [4 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from littlenut
Review:
I'm interested! Looking forward to what comes next-- I know you are trying to "speed things along" but please don't do so at the expense of a good story, the beginning is very intriguing.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'll do my best. Promise.

:)
Review By [littlenut] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from KnightOwl
Review:
I'm still not sure what is happening but it is very intriguing. I have lots of questions that after reading this. I wonder if Willow is still going to be pulling Buffy from heaven and then I wonder how Buffy and Dawn end up in Harry's world. I love a good Buffy/Snape story and I'm looking forward to seeing how this one unfolds. Please keep writing, I know my questions will be answered eventually.
Comments from author:
Sorry about the confusion. Hopefully it will cleared up fairly soon.

Willow will be pulling Buffy from heaven soon and I can't tell you about what will bring Buffy and Dawn there, and I can tell you it will probably give you a few more questions, but it has to do with my pairing.

I really am trying to speed things along, just because I have some really great Buffy and Snape moments ahead.

:D

And yeah, all the questions will be answered. Just not yet. LOL.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [23 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from vargamor
Review:
Since you put this in the Buffy centered section, I'm really hoping that once Buffy comes back you'll be focusing on the Buffy/Snape aspects and not on the Dawn aspects? (Nothing worse than settling down to read a good Buffy/Snape fic that's all about the Dawn and how powerful she is...)

The writing is good. Spike's pain comes through beautifully as does Willow's refusal to believe anything's wrong, typical Willow.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this one.
Comments from author:
I know. I'm one for the build-up. One of my fics is in response to a challenge and I think I am the only one who didn't have the reunion that the challenge called for in the first chapter. I hasn't happened yet and I'm on chapter seven.

But, it'll be moving better soon. Hopefully.

I'm focusing on Dawn right now so that the reader can have a good grasp of why Buffy will be making a certain decision in a couple of chapters.

Thank you for reading and I hoped that you enjoyed it. More is coming soon. And I think that you will like what I have in store for Buffy and Snape.

;)
Review By [vargamor] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
This is really good, can't wait to see where you take it.
Comments from author:
Thank you!!

Happy you enjoyed the update.

:)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

:)
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Dawn's dreaming of Harry?

If Spike thinks that Dawn is predicting Buffy resurrection, maybe he should keep an eye on the grave.
Comments from author:
Yep, just why will become appearent soon. And no kidding on Spike. Poor Spike, he's got a tough road ahead of him.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This chapter was a little more disjointed - following Spike's thinking that Dawn might have the gift of precognition (or clairvoyance). Overall, enjoying the story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. This was really all that I could think of, but the future chapters should be better.

I couldn't see Dawn with a "real" magic talent, but precog kinda made sense.

Plus, it will come in handy. LOL.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
While I'm not sure how the plot is going in AUey fashion, the prose and storytelling for this plausible "missing scene" so far are quite lovely.
Comments from author:
Sorry. Thanks. It's going pretty much AU from the "Gift" on BtVS and from book three of HP, though much of it will remain the same from the book four, it'll have a few added scenes to tie in everything.

Thanks for the review!!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KnightOwl
Review:
This is really good so far. I can really feel Dawn's pain and I feel so badly for her. I'm wondering why she drew a picture of Harry, though. I really can't wait to read more of this story, I love the pairing of Buffy/Snape. Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you. It will all be revealed soon. Muhahahahahaa
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [18 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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