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Review of chapter "Wouldn't Be the First Time" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
Random thought: Could you show us how Charlie and Jack met? Because me thinks those two would get on like a house on fire from day one.
Comments from author:
I'll take that thought and let it run around in my head for a while - maybe I'll come up with something.

Em :D
Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wouldn't Be the First Time" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
Ok, I think I've been quietly reading this series up until this point without reviewing. I'm naughty. But I enjoyed it sooooo much and now I've reached my limits:


You're sooo mean to always just hint at all the good stuff and never give us anything tangible. And I think I love you for it. Especially as I am right now, which is mighty tipsy. Still, I'll love it sober too, so keep up the great work and please don't stop here.
Comments from author:
Thank you. That's quite a compliment. :)

I'm not stopping there, it just could be a while before the next part of the series.

Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wouldn't Be the First Time" from Maria
This one is interesting because it's starting to finally hit the deeper aspects. It isn't quite as amusing although Don's anger at the "idiot" comment is, as always, incredibly amusing. Seriously, when will he learn? Charlie's a big boy now.

I like the way each prison experience ends in a highlight of the relationships to date. It's a unique way to do it, and you're good at showing and not telling.

As always, I look forward to more. (I'm going to be out of Internet range for a while, but it's set to email me if you post new stories.)
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed this one too - I was a little worried that making things less 'crack' like would put people off. Charlie is indeed a big boy now ;) Don really needs to get his head around that one.

I have ideas but nothing concrete enough for another story yet... but you never know. ;)

Review By [Maria] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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