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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Kalliza
Review:
I just reread this, and wanted to put in my hope that you pick it back up again. I believe there is a severe lack of clone-Jack centric fics, and this one looks like it'll be one of the best when the plot really gets off the ground.
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Here is hoping you begin to write again soon. I so want to see where this goes. Its a great idea that no one else has attempted and it should not lay unfinished.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
A brilliant concept and very well executed. I was hooked from the start and if you find time to update I'll be a happy camper! :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Any chance of an update?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Vickzie
Review:
Aww poor Jack and Buffy!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Any chance of an update on any of your stories? I really hate to see them left hanging.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Tuttle
Review:
Please please please finish this story :'(
Review By [Tuttle] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from deathgeonous
Review:
Huh, I don't know if you're still getting these reviews, but this was good.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from SpacedCadet
Review:
PLEASE do more!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the Evilest of Authors\Muses.
Comments from author:
It's gonna be a while. Aside from having decided to revise this story before I continue it to its planned ending, I am also working on other projects, over which I have my lab hours, over which I have my actual College classes. Don't worry unduly - it will be updated and it will be finished, but as my schedule and other projects allow.

I know, it's so frustrating when you read a good story, get really into it, and then realize it's not done yet and the author hasn't updated in four years.

Check out my recommendations list if you need something to read in the meantime. I especially suggest reading "Dwarfbread."
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from atz
Review:
One of the more interesting pairings, with characters slowly developing and dealing with the clash of experience and hormones.

Would very much like to see this continued.

Some ideas to help you catch the muse (maybe as bait in the electrified net you are planning...)

1. Gen. O'Neill trying to come down heavy on Buffy and things turning into a snarkfest
2. Buffy starting a "we need to talk" conversation - Jon going into mental meltdown before Buffy reveals her intent to expand on the clash of adult experiences with teenage bodies/social structures and discuss how things should work between them
3. Jon trying to get "his" team to trust him re: Buffy without revealing her secrets
4. Buffy vs Teal'c when 3. doesn't work either to escape capture or prove superhuman abilities
5. Tai Chi +/- sparring between Jon and Buffy
Comments from author:
Thanks for the ideas, it's nice to get some outside inspiration, and I'll probably be using some. While I don't change my stories to suit my readers, I do like to know what people would be interested in seeing happen, and if I can work it into the story then great.

This story won't be updated for a while, because I have decided to revise it - basically expand and improve it before I complete it. The characters developing and dealing with their hormones versus their experiences? Gonna delve a lot deeper into that.

Never fear though! I do have quite a bit more story, an actual ending, and future sequels of varying length planned.
Review By [atz] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Xayian
Review:
“You’re playing Tic-Tack-Toe…against yourself?” Jack was incredulous. How did that work?

“Know what’s worse? I keep losing,”

With that, I am hooked. LOL
Review By [Xayian] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from yrfgd
Review:
Sure wish you'd continued this. It's becoming a very interesting story as well as a well plotted joining of Jon & Buffy
Comments from author:
I hope to, I really hope to. I just need time I don't have, and I need to recapture my muse - perhaps some type of electrified net...
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [29 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from (Past Donor)BuffyFan
Review:
So sad seeing this great story not updated in over two years.
Comments from author:
RL is evil and should be punished.
Review By [(Past Donor)BuffyFan] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Two" from Whimsicality
Review:
I will beg on hands and knees or bribe with shipments of homemade cookies if it means you write more in this story. Seriously, I am typing on my knees here...*bats eyelashes pleadingly* I love this fic! Your characterizations are fantastic, your original characters crack me up (Ehren and Clea are brilliant!), the plot line is unique and complex and developing into something I would really love more of. I love the relationship between MiniJack and Buffy from how they met to how its developing now and I think you have a great pace on reveals of secrets and all of that. The original team and hints of others getting involved are fascinating and I can't wait to find out how that develops, how their interference affects thing, and how much resistance Jack and Buffy put up as well as what other forces might be in play and what's next to come in the opening of the seals. Please please please come back with more?!?!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I don't know how I missed this review, but I'm glad I checked - it gave me an idea for the story :D

I really hope to continue writing this soon.

As a story that I started for writing practice with one of my less crazy ideas, it sure did take off. I'm very happy it was able to inspire this level of love and devotion, and I hope you continue to enjoy it whenever I start writing it again. RL has been kicking my ass for the last year, maybe longer, so hopefully I'll get a reprieve over X-mas break and be able to go back to writing.

I have also been concentrating a lot of time on two interrelated epic-length fics (which I won't start posting until they're finished to avoid making readers wait for more when the muse goes away), and my original stuff, so I've not had a lot of time to spare for updates.

If you need more cool stuff to read in the meantime, try the stories on my recommendations list. I like to recommend really good or just plain fun stories that haven't gotten a lot of attention (and a few that are really popular, but they usually are the best ones anyway). You might find something cool you missed.
Review By [Whimsicality] • Date [4 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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