I really like this story - although I am still not sure about the gods/goddesses bit - In what pantheon is Loki related to Bast? He's Norse, Bast is Egyptian, I believe. And what do they have to do with Willow? Anyway You were off to a very promising start and I would have given this a 9 or 10 except that you seem to have stopped writing. Why do I say that? Simple; this has been updated in 4 years!! The last response to a review was in 2008 where you mention a new chapter, but none ever materialized. I do hope that if you have lost interest, or your muses, or if your posting this on a different site, that you add an author's note to either the story or your profile. I hope against hope that you actually update this!
Review By [Silver] • Date [31 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
This is certainly interesting. I enjoyed Willow's interactions with JC and Anita. I'm looking forward to finding out more about what is going on with the agreement with Willow's parents.
I don't think Anita would have introduced herself as "Anita Blake" to a small child, most probably just as "Anita".
If you are using the Sandman characters (or the myths they are based on), Loki's elder son is "Fenrir" (with 2 'r's).
Comments from author:
Fenrir eh?
Well with the Anita Blake thing I just thought Anita would just be Anita.
That was hilarious, I love the interactions of the ancient gods...very very funny :) btw...yay! update! yes ma'am...that was beautiful, as the middle of six siblings, it's also very realistic :) thanks for sharing! love xx Shezzi
Comments from author:
Thank you!
I will endevor to update more often.
Hopefully.
Watch out the next chapter for more god interactions!
hols
