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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nemogbr
Review:
I like the start of this new story. Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately, when I wrote each story in this series, I intended for them to be more-or-less one shots. My muse is on sick leave...she has unenthusiasticismitis.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Grymstalker
Review:
Very good. It would make a very interesting longer story. I hope to see more of your stories in the future.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Grymstalker] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!

Loved it!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [23 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DerekTheRogue
Review:
I KNOW that you are only doing these as a series of one-shots.....
But could you PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE make this one into its own full story?
It would be SOO good to get all the reactions of people involved on both sides .
Plus I could easily see her , or even a group effort from the girls , going back to sunnydale to snatch Xander.
Or maybe sending him an invite to visit gotham and a plane ticket.
Because I could see Bats going nuts 1st over him showing up but then going nuts about training and approving of him once he sees what Xander really is about underneath the goofball and self-condescending act to what hre is and his relentless drive to protect 'his girls'.
Because Xanders' real attitudes towards evil and his drive when in protect mode would impress the shit out of him.

Derek The Rogue
Review By [DerekTheRogue] • Date [23 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tjin
Review:
I Hope this will be continued.

It's a really good start to a story.

-Tjin
Review By [Tjin] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
the last paragraph .... well done .. very funny ... at least I thought it was ..
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [4 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ferball
Review:
oooh - this is good! More please?

jen
Review By [ferball] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Poor Xander. I think they would have made a beautiful couple, until the Joker turned Xander into a mouse or something. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TruthIsWhatUMakeOfIt
Review:
you should seriously consider continuing this fic possibly have xander call cassandra
Review By [TruthIsWhatUMakeOfIt] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
this gave me chuckles.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thewander
Review:
O please more of this one its great...
Review By [Thewander] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
Review:
I'm sorry, is there actually story here? I just see a lot of dialogue, in what's a textbook example of Talking Head Syndrome. Maybe the actual story bits didn't get posted? O_o

Oh wait! There's about ten words total that are actions and not dialogue. My bad. ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks for your criticism. I have to agree with you about the Talking Head Syndrome, and I will be changing this story soon. My first story, Boy Meets Girl, will remain in that manner of writing, mostly because I wrote it so long ago and I have fond memories of it.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TAO
Review:
Okay, you really need to follow up on this one. I've always liked the Xander/Cassandra pairing, because it has a lot of potential for an amusing relationship balanced by both dark and humorous moments.

I can just imagine them meeting for a date at some coffee house (since Cassandra does have a weakness for mochas...or at least she did early on in her series before they cancelled it and made her go psycho, which they did explain, but she's still a little "damaged").
Review By [TAO] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sistercity
Review:
Cool, but I think Xander might be in a bit of trouble when he doesn't ring Cassandra! :)
Review By [sistercity] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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