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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from ChefJackButler
Review:
Interesting concept, but the poor spelling, bad grammar, wrong wording, and horrible execution ruins it. Everyone in the story is out of character, the plot is manipulative and full of Deus ex Machina. Its an interesting effort, but ultimately an unsuccessful one.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [20 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from fourmenandanelephant
Review:
It's nice that Xander and Faith somehow are "rewarded" for bad childhoods into becoming rather interesting soldiers. When and how they come back gets absurd claiming Buffy, Willow and Giles would begin acting like single minded harpies and not worry search and truly care about what happened to Xander and Faith. The end of the story is where it gets absurd where Anya somehow shows up with the needed information and then after a miraculously short and less than bloody battle an under aged child is manipulated into taking an action that is equivalent to kidnapping and assault of a minor. Children cannot give effective consent legally and aren't physically or psychologically mature enough to do so... So when Dawn's "new family"at ONI and among the Spartans leave her to die alone behind enemy lines she's going see why Halfrak is called a vengeance "demon" not Angel and she's going to wish she hadn't thrown away her very flesh and blood. I really wouldn't want to be in D'Hoffyrn's shoes at this point because I see both Buffy, Willow and Glory wanting to "talk" to him about his minions little stunt eventually. People seem to forget that in canon Buffy literally loves Dawn more than life itself and is technically her mother via magic and is willing to do almost anything to keep her safe....
Review By [fourmenandanelephant] • Date [21 Aug 14] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Good job with the character interactions! Lot of fun seeing the Buffster shoot herself in the foot so effectively!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AndreaMaine
Review:
This was a truly good story. Now I would love to see Dawn as a Spartan and have Glory try to recover her Key now!
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [20 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice finish to this little fic, thank you for sharing
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from TachikomasUncle
Review:
LordKalvan demands a sequel, on pain of Hostogi invasion ;P
Review By [TachikomasUncle] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!
Comments from author:
Appreciate it :)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [5 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Vilkath
Review:
Eh bit suprised Xander and faith were 'happy to be soldier drones', do nothing but train and such. Then be cut up, experimented on and watch 31 or their closest 'friends' durring trianing die to that procedure. And they still looked at the 'good doctor' as a mother figure? I don't care how abusive and drunk Tony was to Xander.. that is worse than his orginal home life.

I didn't like how the story seemed to gloss over the horor's Xander should of felt at the way people were treated.
Comments from author:
But that's what they chose, and remember as well, loyalty, thy name is Xander.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from HolyKnight
Review:
Methinks that Glory its just screwed up for good.....
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from DarthPayne
Review:
Oh, come, on.

You can't leave it there.

Tell me there will be a sequel.
Comments from author:
I'm promising nothing, but at the moment, no there won't be. This one was hard enough to finish and I've gone completely brain dead on several others that I've got on the go that I'd like to complete first.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from ora
Review:
Awesome story!
Comments from author:
Cheers
Review By [ora] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from MissE
Review:
That is such a cool ending! er... Except what is going to happen about Glory? Or is she no longer a part of the AU? 'Cause that would be interesting. All they've seen and done, and suddenly a hell-goddess turns up after a Spartan. Hmm...
Comments from author:
Kind of forgot about Glory, but I generally do. Hate Glory and I tend to ignore her totally. But the idea of sending her after a SPARTAN-III is kinda amusing, but probably not.
Review By [MissE] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Loatroll
Review:
Definitely one of the better Halo/BtVS crossovers I've read. I liked the whole story, and I thought the ending was an worthy one.
Thanks for the read!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it, had most of this finished for a year or more but the ending was a pain in the arse.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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