Eh bit suprised Xander and faith were 'happy to be soldier drones', do nothing but train and such. Then be cut up, experimented on and watch 31 or their closest 'friends' durring trianing die to that procedure. And they still looked at the 'good doctor' as a mother figure? I don't care how abusive and drunk Tony was to Xander.. that is worse than his orginal home life.
I didn't like how the story seemed to gloss over the horor's Xander should of felt at the way people were treated.
Comments from author:
But that's what they chose, and remember as well, loyalty, thy name is Xander.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
I'm promising nothing, but at the moment, no there won't be. This one was hard enough to finish and I've gone completely brain dead on several others that I've got on the go that I'd like to complete first.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
That is such a cool ending! er... Except what is going to happen about Glory? Or is she no longer a part of the AU? 'Cause that would be interesting. All they've seen and done, and suddenly a hell-goddess turns up after a Spartan. Hmm...
Comments from author:
Kind of forgot about Glory, but I generally do. Hate Glory and I tend to ignore her totally. But the idea of sending her after a SPARTAN-III is kinda amusing, but probably not.
Review By [MissE] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Cool. Keep it coming, I want to see SPARTAN Faith & Xander vs STUPID US Military. Ah, Colosseum was nothing compared to this, the Arena of Decadent Games... The Internet!
Review By [LordSia] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Might i suggest, a copious application of firepower, a bash over the head for the stupid colonel, followed by a demonstration of shields on the Spartans when whatver they use to kill adam goes off. I assume it will be explosive :). (That's assuming their mark of suit has shields yet of course.)
Oh and i don't think Spartan armour has faceplates!
Adam should be worried :)
Review By [JamieT] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]