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Review of chapter "Name" from (Recent Donor)Luna
WHOA! Why did Theoden want to kill her????????
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Name" from leelaa
I have no understanding at all of just what happens in that scene at the end, but this fic from Eowyn's POV is nevertheless a lovely read. But it's a bit like loving how a song sounds, and having no idea what the lyrics mean. No matter what the connoisseurs say, one really can't understand a song by its music alone and ignorant of the lyrics. I love how the scene is described, but its meaning remains rather tantalizingly out of reach, even after several reads.
Some explanation - either above the fic on the fic-page itself, or in the summary, or in a note below the fic - would be *hugely* appreciated. I do know it's been a while since you wrote it, and if you don't recall exactly what you intended for the scene, that's perfectly okay because it's an absolute pleasure to read this fic anyway. Just - if you do remember - please add a note so we can all appreciate it the better. But anyway, thanks so very much for writing this piece, and the entire series.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Name" from GoldenRat
I am so confused, Wormtongue gives up his life to save Buffy, wah?
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Name" from Iriai
Well now, that's certainly a twist. And for some reason, I can't bring myself to hate Grima as I usually do. What was it he said at the end, though?
Review By [Iriai] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Name" from Yvonnia
I really like the format of it was written, the point of view, even the imagery. It's real good, and I'm glad to have read it.
Review By [Yvonnia] • Date [14 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Name" from Evie
I'm really enjoying this series of stories. The way you write is wonderful and makes it a pleasure to read. I was waiting for you to work your way around to the Rohans...particuarly Eomar...I really really hope that you make at least three more chapters to this story. One for Eomar's point of view, one for Theodred, and one for Theodin. To see it from their eyes would be great. Anyway, keep up the amazing work!!! I think I must check everyday to see if you have wrote a new one...(kinda sad but of well)....

Review By [Evie] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Name" from Lux
I'm completely facinated by this series of stories and cannot wait to read more!
Review By [Lux] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Name" from Bluedove
That's something I didn't expect to happen. :D
Review By [Bluedove] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Name" from (Past Donor)TheStatue
Though this chapter is beautifully written, I confess to slight confusion. Based on paragraph spacing and the flow of the story (as well as Theoden-king's general behavior), it sounds as though Theoden-king says "kill her", after which Grima throws himself in front of the blade (It also would make little sense for Grima to shout "kill her" and then stare at her as he dies with love in his eyes). However, judging from the responses of your other readers, it appears the consensus is that Grima shouted the command.

I don't suppose you could clarify this at all?

Either way, this is an amazing one-shot. Your writing style is sophisticated and well-flowing and is a true pleasure to read.
Review By [(Past Donor)TheStatue] • Date [4 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Name" from Demongirl
*ear-splitting shriek* This was beautiful. Eowyn's feelings were immense.. would have been cool if she'd fallen head over heels, as well. Eomer's point of view would be a very interesting thing to read, and of course Grima ended up falling in love. Good that he's out of the picture. Nice to see that Theoden King of Rohan ended up not-so-weak-and-grima-controlled, when Buffy entered. Fresh air away from Rivendell!
Review By [Demongirl] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Name" from Lisa
I was so happy to see another installment by you on Latest today. This was wonderful and you really captured her voice nicely. Would love Eomer's POV about this little scene as well. Thanks so much for sharing!
Review By [Lisa] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Name" from BlameyFomorrii
"“Indeed, Captain,” he says, “she is only a woman. Let her have her knife.”"

---Still doesn't conceive to admit that she may in fact be carrying a SWORD. Makes me laugh at his stupidity.

So-Buffy was allowed to move on-to escape-her "home" at Rivendale, to travel alone?

"Grima gasps for breath. His mouth is open wide. His eyes are filled with tears.

The king walks toward her with a naked blade.

He cries, “Kill her.”

Grima rushes forward."

---At first, I thought it was the king who cried "kill her" but due to the ending, and everyone's reaction, now I think it was Grima who cried "kill her". Due to Buffy's uncanny ability to just enter a room and just about every male who spies her is in instant love, Grima's cry was the straw that broke the proverbial back. None of the men-especially the king-could allow their heart's desire to be tainted and murdered by a disgusting little wormtounge.

I loved this chapter! I've missed reading these-it's a little frustrating that things don't fall together in a linear, ungapped fashion. But that's also the appeal of this series-that everything comes together in it's own time, but we also see a story that makes sense as it wills.

More soon, please!!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Name" from JennyLal
As wonderful as the rest of the stories. Full of despair. I really wish you'd put it together as a series though. It's hard to follow as single, separate stories.
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Name" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Well, that's one way to save the Shire :D

Nice amount of chaos, I'm glad Buffy's out of Rivendell and the Riders are freer than they've been in a while... Trouble, though :)

Hey, do ya plan to translate the Black Speech later on in the fic, or leave as is?
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Name" from MarbleGlove
I'm so glad you're continuing this series. And this is a great addition.
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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