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Five Pit-Stops on the Way to the 21st Century

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Review of chapter "Reports" from Letomo
Review:
I liked this story, especially that last chapter, I was chuckling out loud at the line "air cannon to fire anesthetized bats" - it's just so Jack!

Hope that the last chapter comes, and it finishes out great!
Comments from author:
Thanks - I'll try to think of a good one to end it, at the moment I'm trying to finish off some other stuff so it may take a while.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reports" from Gideon
Review:
Interesting touches. A nice contrast between his interventionism in the case of Bruce Wayne and getting out of the way of history when he was near Smallville.
I'm kinda sad that Dawn didn't tell Buffy Spike was still about, she really deserves to know and to make her own decisions.
Comments from author:
Remember, the Wayne intervention is Time Agent Jack - their motto seems to be that the ends justify the means, and the end here is to get a Batman.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrival" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Loved the first chapter, linking Captain Jack to all those Clint Eastwood spaghetti Western roles, and even more the second, with Spike relating his own encounter with Captain Jack in his inimitable way. However, this last one really snuck up on me, as it took me a while to realize that all those temporal signatures might refer to a certain "Lois & Clark" episode involving H. G. Wells, Tempus, and a botched attempt to kill Superman as a baby.

Nice work, all around!
Comments from author:
The L&C episode was what I had in mind, but I'm pretty sure that there was some time travel involving Superman's arrival in comics canon too. I didn't want to pin it down to an exact date to reflect this, in the earliest comics canon Clark first arrived on earth during or soon after the First World War, and for a late date we have things like the Smallville meteor disaster in the eighties...
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from GundumM
Review:
their all right
Review By [GundumM] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cards on the Table" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
Ooh! I really loved the first chapter, and the second was entertaining. Jack is so cute. I wonder what he'd do if he met Buffy. hmm...*grin* Fun!

More please.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [14 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cards on the Table" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
So very Spiky. Well done.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Great chapters.

I'm tracking this so I don't miss any future postings.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cards on the Table" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
I love Spike's misinterpretation of Angelus' curse from his reactions. Nice ficlet.
Comments from author:
You can thank Don Sample for that - originally I had Spike aware of the soul, but Don convinced me it wasn't canon, and I think it made it a better story.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nameless" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Very well written and very true to that time frame.

Looking forward to the rest and looking forward to the comments people will have for the LnC piece that will be coming...

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Wonderful piece. I adore Jack, so I'm really looking forward to more!
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nameless" from Rivana
Review:
Oh I miss Torchwood. This one has promise. Would like to see more. :-)
Review By [Rivana] • Date [4 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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