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The O'Neill Twins

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Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from HMaxMarius
Review:
Okay, so it appears you are updating this on a three year and one month basis, which means that your next chapter is three months over due.

Fines are now accruing. ;)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [21 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from garrycooper
Review:
Very good! Loooking forward to seeing more when life dives you time.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from Blackett
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wonderful. can't wait for more...it is so funny.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from nightshadowlife
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interesting, can't wait to see more
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from FohkuKohgeki
Review:
Awesome. Keep it up...
Review By [FohkuKohgeki] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from spk
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I am definitely intrigued by such an interesting story idea. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from Genuka
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Wow! This is great! Perfect way for them to grow up a bit. You might want to have one of them comment on the fact that at least this way they don't have to deal with being treated like little kids and that they can work on their evil silent communications of doom. Mwahahahaha!!!!

Addition:

Nah. It'll be fine. you can always pass some it off as more side effects from Loki's poor techniques, from both the cloning and the virus and counter acting it. They said in the show that he's ^really^ bad at this stuff. It's why John was dying in the first place. Think about it. *looks smug and tries to ignore building migraine while waiting for pain killers to kick in*
Comments from author:
Oh yes. They will practically have their own dictionary's worth of body language. I'm also thinking of having them become more advanced humans due to Thor tinkering. So they can heal a little and mind chat. Do you think that'd be too super!character and annoying? It's just a thought...
Review By [Genuka] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay, my second and third guesses are that either when the Monks put the key in human form or when Glory's portal to every dimension opens, Jack and John think that Thor is opening their portals and they step through. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Comments from author:
*gape* OH MY GOSH!!! What the heck, you were totally mind spying on me! You guessed it! *pat on the head* Nice one!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from twlight
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This is so cute. I love the whole idea. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this extremely wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from RafMereC
Review:
Great idea
I can't wait to see how it turns out
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from RevDorothyL
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10 years of no-one but the other Jack/John to interact with? You are not kind to O'Neill (either of them!), are you? :)

Seriously, though, I'm glad to see another chapter of this, and I hope there'll be a third one soon-ish?
Comments from author:
Tee hee. They're going to drive each other mad. But by the end of their time they're going to be like Fred and George. Almost perfectly synchronized with one another. They're practically going to be the same person. Barring the time they separated, they're going to have the same memories growing up, and then to spend only time with one another for years? Wow. Plus I'm going to have them reading Harry Potter in there at one point and they're going to think that talking like Fred and George would be funny.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from Katricia
Review:
Nice. Hopefully no three-year wait for the next chapter, though? ;)
Comments from author:
Doh! Arrow spot on with that comment! *hangs head* I promise it won't take so long!
Review By [Katricia] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm guessing there will be a wish here at some point.
Comments from author:
Hmm, good idea, but nope!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Last Freakin' Straw" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Your interpretation of John in high school rings with Michael Cera in "Scott Pilgram vs The World".

Six is a bit harsh for both of them. But "dems the breaks."
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What doesn't kill you..." from AllenPitt
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they're going to be impossible to tell apart--both 16, both have lived with each other for 10 years so they know everything the other knows and all that. Neither will want to go back to high school. I suppose one question is, are the scoobies in the same dimension or will it take a portal/quantum mirror to get there. Maybe the SGC doesn't know what to do with them so sends them on an undercover mission to Sunnydale High?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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