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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jalimar
Review:
Freaking awesome story
Review By [Jalimar] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Cool story. First time I've read one like it.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [24 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very well written and unusual Halloween story. Great stuff, thanks. Any chance of a peek into the future?
Comments from author:
At one time I did plan on doing another one. but lack the time to do anything else new.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RayvenNightshade
Review:
good stuff and a nice twist
Review By [RayvenNightshade] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from daveykins
Review:
Great story - a sequel would be excellent!

(Sorry for the short review!)
Comments from author:
Short is better than none (grin).
Review By [daveykins] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fyrloche
Review:
I was always a big fan of the 'Predator' movies. This story is very good. Thank you for the reply to my review. I have to say that I admire the fact that you are not letting your dyslexia discourage you from writing. It also explains some of your misspellings. (The letters were in reverse order.) Catch you later.
Comments from author:
I have loved Predator movies from the first time I saw them. Would love to write more of this but haven't the time. I have an ideal for a part to kind of. it would cross again thou this time with Battlestar.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Fantastic idea. I was kinda surprised with the timeline format, but it all made sense in the end.

I wonder what the Mayor's demon snake skeleton would look like all in one piece on a wall?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [21 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeB
Review:
Thanks, that was one of the best Halloween fics I've read.

Nicely done.
Comments from author:
thanks for the compliment.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Ouch. Increasing the death toll :)

Well written. Poor Xander.

Nice to have confirmation of alien beings. Thanks for still saving the school :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
good story hope you continue it.
Review By [war] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
Ouch ... but nice story .... how about a followup chapter for about 5 yers in the future...
Comments from author:
I do have a few ideals, If this takes place in the First Predator movie, then the next one takes place in LA. then the next would be around the time of the fall of Sunnydale.(my time line).
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vorax
Review:
Very nice.
Review By [Vorax] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Whoa! Poor Xander. Your story sent an evil little shiver down my spine. But now I wonder how Predator/Xander would handle Adam or Glory. Lol!
Comments from author:
Still got the Mayor to deal with as well ;-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Dark and a little sad, but well told and not overly graphic. Thanks for sharing the variation.
Comments from author:
thanks. It would be easy to make this a bloodbath story. but Couldnt see that happening.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Wow.
Got any plans for a sequel?
See ya!
Comments from author:
Not really but you never know.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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