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Review of chapter ""Theres Always Another Way"" from JediKnight
Review:
A few problem with this idea; the "Alien" films take place way in the future not in the 1990's and you are missing your backstory.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Theres Always Another Way"" from CPTSkip
Review:
Finally read part 3. Excellent and logical solution. Ripley is just so cool! Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Newt" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Problem fixed. Thanks :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [3 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Theres Always Another Way"" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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This...doesn't really make a lot of sense. Where exactly is the time/dimension travel that makes this possible?

EDIT: Then it really DOES make no sense! You were aware that the Alien films took place in a distant future where FTL space travel was common and humans were settled on many other worlds?! BtVS was 1997 to 2003. The Alien saga was *at least* 2100+ (probably more like 2200+ with Ripley's 57 years long suspended animation at the start of the 2nd film). I *repeat*, time periods an absolute minimum of a century apart, probably 2 centuries! Really, this is basic reasoning - it's not rocket science here.
Comments from author:
There was no time dimiension travling, actaully. The idea was that Joyce was the kid in the second Alien Movie.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Theres Always Another Way"" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
[Hey, stairs, not stiars.]

I like Ripley's voice and thought process :)

Wow. Cool moment in time.

That way of closing the portal is an *excellent* idea.

I'm not saying that it would've worked on the show. I'm not saying that it would work in other fanfic universes (I wouldn't have it work in mine - personal world view). I am saying that they should've tried it on the show. Heck, other fanfic authors should have had their characters try, but as far as I know, you are the first.

In most other cases, with a different cast and a weaker build-up, I'd come to that point and feel let down by the story - that the author had taken the easy way out.

However, *here* Ripley carries the moment through sheer strength of personality, which makes *your* writing of this method of closing the portal a 'strong' event, story-wise. So, I'll Recc this fic :D
Comments from author:
Thanks for the edit! I'll be sure to fix that as soon as I can. Which will most lilkely be after I comment my reviewers!
Actaully, another fanfic author did this before me. I forgot the title but it was a story where Xander was the reincarnation of Harry Potter and he was paired with Tonks, Hermione, and Faith.

Thanks for reccomending me! I appareciate it and you didn't have to. ^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Theres Always Another Way"" from purrfus
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Some really interesting bits and pieces.

The ending blew me away.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're Family" from Jorrie
Review:
This is interesting. I'm curious as to where this story is going to lead. I'd really love to see more from you soon. No rush. I'll be on the look out for any updates.
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're Family" from LostSpartan
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"They may not be blood, but Buffy, Joyce and Dawn were her family. Nothing in the world could change that."

Ohh Ripley, Ripley, Ripley - you of all people should know not to even THINK things like that when the universe (or a certain evil author) is listening...

Excellent job so far - looking forward (with some trepidation) to the next instalment!
Comments from author:
Ah, I'm glad you like it. This isn't going to be a full on story, but just some scenes that show what life is like living with Ripley. Just so you know, the version of the second movie I saw, Ripley and Newt were safe in hypersleep and such and I haven't seen the third or fourth movie yet so I kind of just went by the 1st and second and my impression of Ripley.

Anyway, the relationship between the four may or may not stay this way. We'll see. *grin* Hope too see you in the next chapter.
Review By [LostSpartan] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're Family" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story continues to amuse me. I hope you continue to write this series of little stories.
Comments from author:
First off- thank you for reviewing! I will, but updates will depend on what pops into my mind! ^_^
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Newt" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very, very cute idea.
Comments from author:
thanks. I thought so too.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Newt" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
I'm glad she's okay.

Hmm, this is Ripley's Clone, right?

I'm glad Ripley managed to get 'back to Earth' before this 'daughter' died as well :)

Plus - hey - 'grandkids' she can train with ;)
Comments from author:
um. The version I saw of the second movie ended with Ripley in her hypersleep along with Newt and the android whose name escapes me and the other dude, who was the cammandor. They were the only three left and headed to earth. I haven't seen the other 2 movies yet. I'm going too though. Anyway, thanks for commenting. I may actauly play with the training idea. ^_^ thanks for the idea!
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Newt" from CPTSkip
Review:
Wow! This is a really warped but interesting idea for a story, but I liked it. I just hope Ripley can keep Joyce/Newt alive this time. Not to mention, I think Ripley might be one of the few women in the multiverse with a stranger life than Buffy. Lol!
Comments from author:
Alive? I thought they both lived? Unless I missed something...granted I haven't seen the third or fourth movie yet so...^_^;; I may start a sirese of drabbles of what life was like with Ripley after this chapter. Who knows?
Anyway, thanks for commenting! ^_^
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Newt" from Mcspender
Review:
Wooohaa!
Creepy!!

See ya!!
Comments from author:
creepy? Naw. Anyway thanks for the review.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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