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Review of chapter "The Last Night" from deathgeonous
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Ah, saw this on the front page and decided that I needed to reread it. And it's still a great and fun fic. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [5 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Night" from SamuraiSky
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Hilarious! Loved it. Excellent writing as usual.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Last Night" from tenchifew
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Absolutely great story.
Thank you for writing.
Review By [tenchifew] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rebirthing" from Rune
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Harry/Luna/Winifred/Illyria?

Now they need to have kids.

That family could rule the wizzy world, if they felt like doing the paperwork.
And you just KNOW that as backwards as the British Wizards are they would never use computers.

Nah, forget ruling, just lets play "whack a mole" with the death eaters and bad purebloods.

"Whack a Wizard"! I could make money of a game like that. If I could program...

Nice fic. Harry/Illyria is underdone.

Thanks.
Review By [Rune] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Last Night" from deathgeonous
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As always, this was a joy to read.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Night" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
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Loved it! Please tell me there's a sequel to this somewhere and I've just missed it!
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [2 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Savior" from Rune
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I'd rate it 11 if I could. Illyria is not in enuf fics, neither is Luna. The two women would be good for each other and seeing them with Harry only makes it better. IMNSHO Harry and Luna should have been together in the books. JKR made bunches of mistakes. Moldywhat was made too powerful, Dumbledork was made too nice and forgiving, Harry was tortured too much and not trained enuf, I could go on... So Illyria is just what is needed in the final battle, your only problem is there are too many death eaters still alive. At least you killed Malfoy Sr. If only you had Illyria kick Draco in the balls full strength thus gelding him. Well you can write a sequel and fix these little mistakes, still its an outstanding fic.

While using song lines as chapter titles is nice its not something I'd notice, I don't listen to music with vocals, all too often the lyrics just suck, and even do that badly.

What you can write next is when the new trio go to see Illyria's temple and visit Faith. And how would the Stargate crowd take it if the three just Apparated in one day? There is so much you can do with this group!
Comments from author:
Ehh, too many fics do that kind of crap. It was just meant to be a one-shot song fic, then I expanded it a few, then Skillet came out with a new CD, etc.
Review By [Rune] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Last Night" from Sandi
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I really love this story. It is one I reread.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Last Night" from laoshi
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The Fredlyria/Lunalyria gestalt rocks. As far as I’m concerned even if I didn’t like the first ten chapters reading this one would make the rest of the story worth it. I enjoyed the shorter chapter style. You’re longer chapters are great but you know how I like to go on and it takes forever to write a review sometimes. I really couldn’t care less about you running out of Skillet songs but I agree completely you need to come back to this story and give us another chapter or two. In my humble opinion what this story needs is a PWP epilogue where we can see their private Yule celebration. In my head it involves kinky demonic sex and really ridiculous amounts of pudding. If you don’t I’ll have to contact the local smut peddlers union 503 and get them to revoke your membership card. Also it might be fun to see that trip to America they were planning before Luna died or even someone the council sent to check up on Illyria. Either way, I love this story and it’ll stay on my recs list.
Comments from author:
Well, they've released a new CD since then. So who knows. :)
Review By [laoshi] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rebirthing" from laoshi
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Another first for this story having Illyria possess more than one person at the same time. Only other place I’ve seen it is in a non-crossover where Illyria infects Wesley after the battle with Cyrus Vail. I think Original!Illyria and Luna!Illyria together is just an amazing idea.
Comments from author:
I know, right?
Review By [laoshi] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You Are My Hope" from laoshi
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"Pity. If I'm dying, I'd like to go out with a bang."
Great line. I don't know how you manage to make finding the humour in impending death so effortlessly but you do.
Comments from author:
I don't know, it just seems so randomly inane and irreverent that it's perfectly Luna.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Say Goodbye" from laoshi
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And the violence is back! I missed it so, but you can't have an Illyria fic without entrails being involved some how. I don't think I'll ever get tired of reading about the members of the Malfoy clan dying in painful and/or humiliating ways.
Comments from author:
When faced with a being of Illyria's magnificence, Lucius Malfoy just fell to pieces...
Review By [laoshi] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thirst is Taking Over" from laoshi
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Illyria is the ultimate outsider and yes there’s lots of comic potential in that but one of the things I like about your portrayal of her is the way she can just cut through all bullshit. Her directness is a joy to watch. Luna and Illyria are surprisingly sweet together and having Illyria fall for the same tactic she’s just observe Ginny using is nicely ironic.

Fairy Luna reminds me of Holly Phoenix etc. Given some mutants see themselves as separate species of humanity what will their reactions be to meeting non-human sentient species?
Comments from author:
Actually, she's Tinkerbell. :)
Review By [laoshi] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Real Thing" from laoshi
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I enjoy it when characters other than Luna know snorkacks really exist. This chapter could work as some kinda PBS special cause the true meaning of friendship is caring enough not to disembowel people. And then Illyria gets all soppy and offers to bring her the still beating hearts of her enemies. It’s such beautiful sentiment, I might shed a tear. Also the way Luna thinks Harry treats her goes a long way making a relationship between them believable.
Comments from author:
And on Valentine's Day, half of Ravenclaw Tower disappears...
Review By [laoshi] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Boundaries" from laoshi
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This fic is really hitting it’s stride in this chapter. Mooning is probably beneath a god-king’s dignity but funny though. I’m amazed the Hogwarts students didn’t drive Minerva to drink sooner.
Comments from author:
Oh Lord. I really need to come back and do some more of this fic...
Review By [laoshi] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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