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Review of chapter "Zander" from LFW
Review:
Not bad, but I do not see Xander stepping out without weapons and back-up.
I do like this using 'Xander the demon magnet' idea.
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zander" from Davelister
Review:
Good start so far, but please, get a beta, Hell I'll do it. Story is ok characters are correct but execution leaves something to be desired. Keep trying.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I will try to better the skill of story telling to keep you reading.
Review By [Davelister] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zander" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
Xander is not only a demon magent but an alien robot magent too
Comments from author:
I figured him more then any other would probably attraction the attention. Thanks.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zander" from Duken
Review:
Get a beta. Beside that, keep writing.

Oh, which Transformers is this? The movie or the old cartoon?
Comments from author:
I am trying for an OC Transformer. Please don't call it the old cartoon. I like so many remember when they were the new TV showing this fall.
Thanks.
Review By [Duken] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zander" from cwolf
Review:
upside: I like the story

downside: My brain hurts from having to translate such things as "The last turn and run down the alley and the fast they can move"

I'm assuming that that is actually "The last turned and ran down the alley as fast as they could move".

But there were some that I can't wrap my head around.

Please find a beta. Not me, I couldn't beta if my life depended on it. But I know what hurts my head.
Comments from author:
Thanks I will try and better the skill. Thank you for the interest.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Zander" from ShadowMaster
Review:
Hey!

Great transformer/BtVS crossover!! While there are a couple out there at the moment I'm glad that you've decided to write one of your own. I hope you decide to keep up with it at least until you give us a name to go with the transformer that just saved Xander's butt from a pack of vampires. Keep up the good work!!
Review By [ShadowMaster] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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