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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from winnie
Review:
what a kettle of fish...It looks to be a lot of fun seeking out the rest of the team.
Review By [winnie] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from mikerich
Review:
WHIMMPER.SNIFF.thats it ---------you are one EVIL person you do no that right.
Review By [mikerich] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrinLondofive
Review:
Okay, I'm just starting this, but I just spotted a glaring error (sorry!)
Storm, of the X-Men? Her given name is Ororo, an African word meaning "beauty",
not "Aurora", which is the goddess of the dawn in Roman mythology.
Ororo is half Kenyan, half African-American, her father was a National Geographic photographer named Peter Monroe.
Comments from author:
I've had someone else leave a very similar review...Again, the spelling or mispelling is a personal preference of mine; now that you've pointed out the very important issue of heritage, however, I may change it. Or not. We'll see. But thank you for pointing out any errors that you may see! More people should do that...We'd all be better writers for it.
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [12 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from ebony
Review:
Please don't leave us hanging, so far this story sounds awesome, please continue with it.
Review By [ebony] • Date [12 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Jaylynn
Review:
Oooh Hyena and soldier Xan! Yay! There is also some fish monster in his history too. So maybe that could come out sometime? XD
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from winnie
Review:
This story is just getting to the fun part and stops...too bad, it was fun and promising.
Review By [winnie] • Date [6 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from limejuize
Review:
Hey you author person *pokes* Are you going to update this anytime soon? The suspense is killing me and I really enjoy the story, so could you pleeease *with a cherry on top* update soon.
Review By [limejuize] • Date [17 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from thecrystalkey
Review:
Yay! for Hyena!Xander (and Soldier!Xander). I love this story. Awesome.
Review By [thecrystalkey] • Date [17 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Uh oh.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Bobboky
Review:
will you tie the soldier thing into the White Knight thing and the One Who Sees thing?
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Sparrow
Review:
am very much loving this fic! Also, if it's counting on Xander's past experiences, what about when he was split into two or the swim meet stuff, he would still have stuff like that lying around in him. Plus, he has been hit by Willow's mojo ontop of the cliff, there's also when he was infected with syphillis and also, the first slayer spirit invaded his dreams, you know stuff like that has just gotta be floating around waiting to be used. :D
Comments from author:
AAAAHHH!!! INFORMATION OVERLOAD!!!

-Laughing- OK, so I could give Xander more abilities, based on other past experiences, but then he'd be unrealistically powerful. Also, let's try and NOT make him go insane. Can you imagine trying to keep up with all those possible abilities? As it is, Xander's two possessions are the things that stand out the most in my mind as possibilities for abilities. Mostly, I just really, really liked those episodes and watched them more than the others. I won't mention just how much Hyena!Xander's sexiness influenced my decision. Ahem.
Review By [Sparrow] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from djhardim
Review:
It could be worse for Xander. At least he won't have to deal with the Swim Team treatment.
Comments from author:
Ah, the Swim Team incident...pardon me while I drool over Nicholas Branden's lovely...assets.
Ahem.
While I would love to give Xander the 'Swim Team treatment', which would be really cool, I see Xander as having the kind of abilities that would help others see him as he truly is: a protector. Xander by nature is highly protective of those he loves, and is a fundamentally simple guy. His core values are basic: if someone threatens him or his own, that threat is done away with. I think that returning the abilities from the Soldier (who is a being designed to protect), and the Hyena (who is pack leader, enforcer, and protector) very conveniently and thoroughly supplement who Xander is. Also, while aquatic abilities would come in handy under certain circumstances, I doubt that such circumstances would happen very often; in contrast, the combat abilities that come from the other abilities would come in handy in pretty much any circumstance imaginable.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great stuff.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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