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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)hols
Review:
This a really wonderful story
Review By [(Current Donor)hols] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zxusof
Review:
heh this was an amusing story. It's always fun to read BTVS/Stargate stories because when the characters are written pretty well in-character they mesh very well and it's always a fun read.
Review By [zxusof] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
great story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lucyferr
Review:
How did you know how to stop my babble though?” Willow added with puzzlement turning to the man in question.
“I had a younger sister once.”

nice

“Will you stop using me in your games of one-upmanship Colonel!” John had the decency to look chagrined.

nice to see someone telling John (in addition to Rodney) to shut it

“Her style is unusual, she tends thrust more than slice.” John nodded in agreement but it took him a moment to realise the likely reason.
“The creatures she used to battle could be defeated by a weapon through the heart.” Comprehension showed on Ronon’s face.

ah

“He’s already dead. I killed him. Drove a bullet into his chest then skinned him alive with a thought.” Despite knowing what had happened John looked shocked.
“It is good that he paid for his crime.” It was Willow’s turn to be shaken at Ronon’s unexpected approval. Ronon looked in askance to Teyla who was looking thoughtful.
“I believe that on Earth such action would be frowned upon.”
“Oh, well, they have a funny way of looking at things.”

I'm glad Ronon (and Teyla too I think) have brains and none of some earth's cultures' hangups. (The Japanese would agree with Ronon.)

Dear Colonel Sheppard & Dr. Weir,
I have tricked Ronon in accompanying me on a trip to find out more about the city. I really wanted to ask you but was pretty sure you’d say no so I decided if I didn’t ask then you couldn’t say no and so I wouldn’t have to disobey you, ‘cause that would have made me feel really bad. Ronon probably thinks I asked so I just want to make it clear it’s totally not his fault. We’ve got snacks and I promise I’ll bring him back safe and sound.
Willow
PS I really am sorry.

LOL! didnt know you could babble in print

Willow described him as a big huggie bear, something that I shall never, ever repeat within his ear shot

lol

Carson, can you get her ready to move?”
“I don’t know if that’s a good idea.”
“You just said she was dead how much worse can she get.” Rodney’s bluntness jolted them into action.

wow rodney is useful

fun fic but a bit of a demachina ending tho :-(
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from shawnie
Review:
This was great and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the series.
Review By [shawnie] • Date [26 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ansku
Review:
Nice :) People sound a bit British (to my Finnish ears, I could be totally wrong) but it didn't distract from the story too badly :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Btw you're ears are working perfectly ;0)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [8 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Wonderful story! I love this Universe!

James
Comments from author:
Thanks :0)
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Heeeeeeee! Oh, my... my face hurts from grinning and Willow's line "“Any way miniaturising is far too complicated in terms of balancing energies and such. I prefer to just fold space/time.”" and the reactions thereto had me laughing like a loon. I would very gladly help you hog tie that muse once you lasso it, this was fantabulous! Now, off to read "Prank".
Comments from author:
That was one of the original lines that led to this fic, it sort of grew and mutated out of control from there!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [17 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from manic
Review:
Absolutely wonderful! I don't know if I've read a fic where Willow comes to Altantis by herself. I thought it worked very well. And I love the relationship between "Ro" ;) and Willow. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Glad to have it appreciated, don't they just go great together ;0)
Review By [manic] • Date [21 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
I liked it.Hope there will be a sequel.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
This was a lot of fun. Thanks for writing it. I particularly enjoyed the big-brother/ground-wire role played by Ronon for Willow, as well as the way she brought out his lighter side (the side he must've shown his little sister in the past, before his world was destroyed).

Also, I enjoyed Willow's two-way rapport with the city itself (not just the assumption that it's inert machinery, waiting for someone to mentally push the right buttons, but rather exploring the idea of what 10,000 years of not much to do but sit and think might do to a highly complex system like Atlantis).
Comments from author:
Nice to hear people appreciating ideas, like to take credit but with the sheer volume of fic out there I'm sure someone's done it better :)

Thanks
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from amusewithaview
Review:
This was fun!

Danke
Comments from author:
welcome
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
ta
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Wow... this was really good. You blended the two show very well. Can't wait for more!

Wispr
Comments from author:
with the help of these kind words from everyone, I'm working on it - thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from azulkan
Review:
Great story.
Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [azulkan] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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