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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stationary
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i looooove this, will we see who put out the contract? the council (either) maybe?
Review By [Stationary] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stationary
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I would love to see this lengthened a little more, maybe turned into a proper story?
Review By [Stationary] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpacedCadet
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Interesting but needs a lot of backstory.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NicCuinn
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I like "dark Giles" stories, so I'm intrigued! I'd love to read more :)
Review By [NicCuinn] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jonathansicari
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Pros: Well written and engaging.

Cons: Edward and Anita are definitely out of character (Edward would not see the risk in killing a child and Anita plain wouldn't do it). I also honestly don't believe Giles is capable of defeating either Anita or Edward.

Further exposition seems in order.
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [6 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)lucidity
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I liked it. A lot. Short fics annoy me as a rule but I recently started writing and have realized how very difficult extend fics can be. So I gave this one a shot and I'm glad I did. I love Ripper, and had not thought of how similar he is to our dear Edward before. I intend to read more of this genre and I intend to see what else you have written because I liked your characterization and the bit of plot in this one short snippet.

I would leave it here, but I have to comment on Dawn and how the other characters deal with her. Perfect.

Great little story,
lucidity
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Christy
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yeah, I can see this...there's quite a few factions that feel threatened by the continued existence of the Scooby Gang, so it would make sense they'd hire the best in the business to go after them...nicely done.
Review By [Christy] • Date [25 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PEBKAC
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I thought it was good, but I have to say I agree with many of the others, not something Anita would do. Or Edward for that matter, not now that he has Donna and the kids; they have unfortunately softened him. Though throw Olaf into this and you'd be right on the money
Review By [PEBKAC] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from physicsteach
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Very nicely done. Giles can be very sinister when he chooses to be.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolfrngr
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Hmmm, I wonder if Edward got a contract on a powerful black magician coming into the states, maybe even starting a cult--why else would he be surrounded by teenage girls? C'mon, a guy nicknamed 'Ripper' has to be evil.

LOL.
Review By [Wolfrngr] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
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I like it and wouldn't mind seeing more.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sweetdoggie
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Good story! Everybody underestimates Giles. Then wham! Good job!
Review By [Sweetdoggie] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from traceyw
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i really like this idea.... Anita against Giles ... you know who would loose when its his children involved ye Anita big time...

this could make a great story and you ve got the start of it .... please give it a go!!! Tracey
Review By [traceyw] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
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I thought it was pretty good.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DeeRose
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Interesting story line. I like that the story centers around Giles instead of Buffy, or another Scoobie.

You just have a small problem in the 10th paragraph. It starts "My hair fell over her face, grimy..." Your pronouns are all wrong. Either "her hair fell over her face" or "my hair fell over my face" and you do that for the whole paragraph. Also it's a little unclear at the end who or what exactly is dead...?
Comments from author:
Okay, thank you! I thought I fixed that when I was editing this. I had been in 3rd Person originally and didn't like that so I fixed it toward Anita's POV.

All fixed now.

Oh, that was suppose to be the contracter that was dead. Sorry if that was unclear.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [12 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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