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Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from bradsan
You know Dean is really a bigot. What would he call his sister who is a witch and his brother who was fed with demon blood. What will he do when they go evil. He doesn't understand that Buffy will do whats necessary when even somebody she loves goes evil. It won't be as easy than with somebody she don't love or cared about but she will do it.

He is not the only one fighting and he is not the one who can say whats right or wrong. His family are doing a off lot things what other people would say is wrong. For example getting money to survive. You can think and say it's in the name of good and they have to live. The law and the taxpayer won't see it like that. So who is he to decide who is a monster and who is not and what is right or wrong, who is evil and who is good.

The Slayer(s) are considered as judge, jury and executor and even they can see grey arias. So Yes Dean is a real Bigot sometimes. grrrrrrrr but he is also cute. He may be a male Slayer but he has to learn not everything is black or white doesn't matter if you are human or supernatural. Dean forgets he and the most people he fight with are running around in the grey area.

love the story, good writing hope you'll find time to update this one. Well all your stories updated would be nice.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from FireWolfe
I agree this needs an update. The idea of Faith with a kid brother is priceless.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [15 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from Silver
Ok, Love this story even if some (some?) of the family relationships are a bit too the dawn/connor Willow/Snape pairing (c'mon, those two just go together - wonder where Oz fits in?) and the idea of the Malfoys actually being good guys is interesting. I think the only vamp that Voldemort can be trying to bring back is either Spike or Angelus. I could be Darla, but she dusted herself to give birth to Connor, so I don't see it. Anyway, as much as I love the story , I cannot give it a 10 because it hasn't been updated in ... almost 3 years!!!! I know that you were still writing, are you planning on updating this, or Beer Bad or On Broken Wings? The one thing I detest about this site is when I find a great story like this only to find the author hasn't updated in a dragon's age!!! Please please keep up the good work and update soonest! If you have decided not to continue writing this or the other two I mentioned, please at least leave an update on your profile or an author's note!
Review By [Silver] • Date [18 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from MarcusSLazarus

Interesting bit of work, really.

If nothing else, the idea of Hermione as the Winchester’s sister is DEFINITELY something I wouldn’t mind seeing explored in more stories; when you think about it, she makes a rather interesting contrast to Sam and Dean, but you can see the POTENTIAL for a connection...

Unfortunately, you’re let down by the other family dynamics you create here; if you’d just left it as a Harry Potter/Supernatural X-over you’d have had a very promising story all on its own, but by bringing in these “Buffy” elements- regardless of how intriguing the idea of a male Slayer line and the differences between them and the ‘traditional’ Slayers is- you just make it that bit more complicated, suggesting that you didn’t have faith in the original idea to retain interest.

There ARE some possibilities with this story, don’t get me wrong- particularly the question of what vampire Voldemort’s trying to resurrect; I don’t think he’s arrogant enough to believe that he can control the Master, so Angelus is the most likely candidate-, but you just stuck in too much rather than leave the story to stand on its own...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Don't Look Back" from lucyferr
Sure would love to read this - but as it has the worst pairing ever (Hermione/Ron), that won't be possible.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from Pixielupa
Please, Please,Please add more to this story cause i'm now caught in the web of it and i'm dieing to see some willow and oz together.
Review By [Pixielupa] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Steel and Spells" from pipertolkien
OMG! poor Hermione. Having to see her parents like that. =/
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Don't Look Back" from pipertolkien
I know that i have read this story before somewhere and was never able to give you reviews. So I am doing now.
this was an great chapter and i really like how Hermione left to protect her child.
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from Dragonelf
I hope you get inspired to add more chapters to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad and hands the author an writer's block smashing mallet::

Nature is never finished.
- Robert Smithson
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from BrownFinderth
The relationships have all been a big surprise, but, welcomed! I read the whole story at once-couldn't stop!
Now, the author just has to continue to write updates. Readers want to know what will happen next!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from heiressofanor
OMG!! I love this story!! Can't wait to read more!! Are Oz & Willow really gonna be a couple? Cause that's totally awesome! Oh, and is Remus ever gonna make an appearance? Cause I gotta say, Remus is just amazing. Sorry, going off on a random mini-schpeil here. But honestly, your story is amazing & I absolutely can't wait to read more! :)
Review By [heiressofanor] • Date [9 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shades Of Grey" from spk
WOW! Finally got around to reading your updates and this just keeps getting better and better. I can't believe how great you are doing at keeping up with all of the characters and crossovers, especially with all of the twists you keep throwing in. You are staying true to the characters as they were originally conceived. I am really enjoying this and can't wait to see where you take it. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [20 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Together We Stand...Or Stagger" from pipertolkien
Well another wonderful chapter. You are such an awesome writer. I was surprised that you brought in Blaise but happy none the less. Can't wait to see what happens next =)
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Heart of the Matter" from pipertolkien
Ok so like i really liked how you introduced Oz into the cast. But what really cought me off guard was how the secret got out that Hermione was pregnant. Can't wait to see who you introduce next! =)
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Can't Fight the Moonlight Part 2" from pipertolkien
omg I have to say that this story is excellent. I have spent the last nineteen hours reading up until this point and the registered so I can add reviews to stories. I have to say that your story is way better than mine cuz like, I have characters out the wazoo. It's hard to keep up with the all the characters in my story. Your story is like mine with alot of character and is hard to keep up with but that's the fun part about it. I'm training my brain to keep up with more people in stories. I also love how you have played this story out. Oh and that twist with Draco becoming a Werewolf. Now that just blew my mind. I couldn't figure out in what time the flash back Draco was having but I found out in later chapters so I was happy.I was really happy that you brought in John in finally. And you also brought in Xander and Oz who were two of my favorite characters in BtVS. You also asked what other characters us fans would like you to bring into the story from BtVS. I wanted Giles. And from Harry Potter I wanted Neville and Luna.
Review By [pipertolkien] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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