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Review of chapter "One Path Splits Into Seven" from maxthehobbit
Review:
Pity that you've abandoned this series, but what you did write was good. I understand, becoming a lawyer is one hell of a job, all the reading especially. Maybe in a couple of years you might have the energy to come back to writing, if not ... thank you for what you have written.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "My Strength and the Trouble It Brings" from maxthehobbit
Review:
10+++
Now that was a very graphic chapter and I'm glad you wrote that author's note at the end, cause I was going to go back and see if I missed something about the how and why he had that 'dream.'

You've really peaked my interest in this story now and my mind is racing ... about how they turned evil, did it have something to do with whatever came through Dawn's inadvertent portal or maybe something to do with rings.

Great Chapter!
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Getting Comfy" from maxthehobbit
Review:
One thing is for sure, you nailed Faith, great characterization. I think you're spot on with her. I think she was one of the fun people in the series and they didn't use her enough, or for that matter Dawn was also underused.
Great chapter!
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [14 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding the Inside" from maxthehobbit
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Hmm you said you weren't too happy with this chapter, but it seems OK to me, maybe not spectacular, but well worth reading. It sorta sets things up for a more interesting story in the future with more action and maybe some funny interaction with Haldir.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [14 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Peeking at the Future" from maxthehobbit
Review:
This story is OK so far. Guess you're still setting up the background, slow, painful, but necessary. I started reading this because it said it was Dawn-centric. I read your note at the end of the chapter ... I find it strange that there are so many Buffy haters out there. I basically like all the characters except Angel and a gay Xander ... gay is gross.
Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [14 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Person Underneath" from Selonianth
Review:
40 years is nothing to a slayer. Giles might not live to see the great war, but almost everyone else would. Certainly Buffy, Faith, and Spike. Super-healing means that the damage caused by age is drastically slowed. Not immortal, but certainly long lived.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Things Not Taught in Red Brick Buildings" from Selonianth
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you forgot Rohirric, which is it's own language.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking to a Dream" from Selonianth
Review:
I feel the need to point out that no matter how many races one stuck in them, elvish blood is magical. You're one of three things. Half-Elvish, Full Elvish, or Not Elvish.

Fairly certain you know this, or should, but I felt the need to say it anyway.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Path Splits Into Seven" from chrysanthemum
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Fun story! The first-person POVs were a little bit awkward, but it all worked out in the end. I enjoyed the paths you chose for each of them, as I thought they matched their personalities well. And the Dawn/Elrohir pairing is great :)
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Path Splits Into Seven" from draco
Review:
Loved it!
Review By [draco] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Home Sweet Flet" from Rune
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What laws would ffn break by changing the pen names?
You don't pay for the site, you don't pay to post there, you don't pay to read the fics.
Fanfiction.net has done some dumb things but then again its free.
You get what you pay for.
Review By [Rune] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking to a Dream" from Chikageko
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...Ok, I may be strange among men but if you learned LOTR well enough to speak sandarin you should know quite a bit about the books. Long and tediously written they may have been but I can still remember the entire sequence of events and their order after only having read each book twice. It's not somthing you just forget.

Interesting thing with the mixmash race thingy but what was the point? I really can't think of a reason...
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Strange State of Ohio" from Chikageko
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That sounds like a phase shift, If the PTB had anything to do with it it was the drunk driver.

Where'd you get the idea from? I know it's fairly common in magic tales to perform a personal or group phase shift to escape the unescapable but it's still nice to know where an authors inspiration comes from.

Anyways, disturbingly short and there could be some more detail but otherwise quite good for a first chapter, I'm gonna continue reading.

...of corse the best BTVS/LOTR crossover awward does help in that decision. Makes more than half of the decision actually since there really isn't enough of a first chapter to really get a feel for your skill or style.

Seeing you later. =^.^=

Please let Dawn more that an after thought or aubductiee, I chose to read this at all because it said Dawn centered...
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Strange State of Ohio" from DawnDreamer
Review:
Just found the fic and chapter1 is exelent. Can't wait to read the others
Review By [DawnDreamer] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One Path Splits Into Seven" from Dragonelf
Review:
Excellent story.

::Starts reading the sequel::


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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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