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Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from DieselDriver
Review:
Dang! Started out with such a cool premiss then ended it before it really got started.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from LordSia
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Comments from author:
So, tell me what you *really* think
Review By [LordSia] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
LOL!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from Frardowin
Review:
I laugh every time I see this Challenge response. Good job.
Review By [Frardowin] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from Frardowin
Review:
i liked this Challenge response.

It made me giggle.

and pee myself.

Kudos, you have my stamp of approval for this story.
Review By [Frardowin] • Date [30 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from Satori
Review:
Sarchasm: noun. The gap between the ironist and the guy who just doesn't get it.

This was a brilliant subversion, and the critics need to learn what irony means.

I approve this product and/or service.
Comments from author:
Thank you kindly

I'm still not altogether pleased at how the story turned out, but I've moved on.
Review By [Satori] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from rothos
Review:
I'm going to side with Cutiepie, that and it wasn't my taste in Powerful!Xander fics.
However the plot bunny is FAR stronger than any of the combined beings bosses.
No revulsion on my part but not in the spirit of the challenge. You reminded me of my early pre-Pit posting fiction attempts.
Comments from author:
Well, the point of the exercise was to horribly violate the spirit of an absolutely absurd and badly thought out challenge, so I guess I'll rank it as a success. I will agree with you though that it is not my best work. Something just didn't come out right, and damned if I know how to fix it.
Review By [rothos] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from Obsidian
Review:
actually the others where wrong. This was pretty good story. Thanks for writing it.

About time someone actually turned Xander bad instead of mister good i'm gonna saved the world guy.

And the twinkies was a nice touch. Made me laugh. thanks.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I swear, this story has gotten more mixed reviews than anything else I've posted. Admittedly, it's not my best work, but the plot bunny just wouldn't go away.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [19 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from amusewithaview
Review:
Heh heh... twinkies... *giggles madly* Nice to see that Halloween didn't just effect the BtVS-verse. These challenges are ridiculous excuses to have a super-powered Xander run amok and become a complete self-righteous turd. GAH, they're an insult to the few truly GOOD Powerful!Xander stories.

Danke for the fun.
Comments from author:
Glad to oblige. I know what you mean - there are a few *really* good Powerful!Xander stories that I almost didn't read because of the masses of absolutely lousy ones.
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [17 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from ThunderGod
Review:
one word...'CRAP'

longer version: it was basically a way to follow the rules as set down in the challnge but twisted to suite your own sick pleasure, or as a way to take a dig at the challenger.

It basically lack any plot, other than destruction of the world, has only one redeeming feature...Twinkies...other than that it was empty, and basically a summary of stupidity as you had Xander turned while his skin was impentrable (based on having all those heroes powers, and shazam (making him holy in itself as well as his blood))

Do more research before posting crap like this!!!!


ThunderGod
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [25 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from Cutiepie
Review:
Um, didn't you violate one of the challenger's rules? It said "no killing Xander" and that is a requirement for being sired as a vampire. He was no longer Xander, nor did he retain any of the qualities that made him Xander in the first place. It was fairly realistic, considering the combined sources, but I don't think that you actually fulfilled the spirit of the challenge. Oh well. It was worth it to have Spike splattered across the scene. =]
Comments from author:
An excellent point. I hadn't thought of that at the time. Oops.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [14 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Hero's Triumph" from Greywizard
Review:
-- "Elsewhere in the multiverse, Twinkies became a great hit on several Earths, and were introduced into the Kree and Skrull empires, to the great dismay of their dieticians." --

Well, it's good to see that you can always find the silver lining inside that black cloud of doom that inevitably seems to follow these challenges you answer. ;-)

Good job. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [14 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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