Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
twoeightysixReview:
Looks pretty good, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, As soon as my muse gets back from its unexpected Holiday :) Ill add more chapters
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twoeightysix] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
TOMReview:
Nice start. A bit chatty but I guess it's a necessary evil for exposure. Keep it up.
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TOM] • Date [13 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from
BumpkinReview:
So far, very intriguing - but so far its very limited too, need more to actually form an opinion.
keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [
Bumpkin] • Date [13 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
MBBReview:
I think I remember this from another site from a few years ago, (UCRL? FFnet? can't remember) where it sat without getting updated.
Although I don't remember it being a crossover, that could be because I didn't know Dogma. But I've seen some other Kevin Smith movies now so I may be able to follow it.
It's still too short to base an thought-trough opinion on, but starts quite catchy
Comments from author:
Thanks for your Review
I did start this story on FF.net and it wasn’t a cross over and well to be truthful, I couldn’t seem to get it past the next chapter of this story, so I decided to try crossing it with Dogma and repost it on TtH. To see if that jump starts my muse and so far its working
Review By [
MBB] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from
BluesnowmanReview:
Interesting start.
Comments from author:
Thanks :)
Review By [
Bluesnowman] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
RobReview:
Nifty start. I'd like to see more of this one.
Rob
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, ill try and get more chapters out asap
Review By [
Rob] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated