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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from azerjaban
Review:
Aww for once a story post chosen that kept the scoobies together and not in different corners of the world.

Hope you update!
Review By [azerjaban] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
Review:
I love this fic so far please please update this wonderful fic again soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [16 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Wonderful babble.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Seems interesting!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from magik
Review:
I want to see where you go with this! Great Idea!
Review By [magik] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from azulkan
Review:
Looking forward to the next chapter. Soon please.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mousemt
Review:
Fun start. The characters are believable, and the writing's good.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wise
Review:
Not bad, but it reads like a first draft, or a story published without first being sent off to pre-readers. A revision with an eye for clarity and dialogue would do the story a world of good.
Review By [Wise] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jerri
Review:
This was well written and entertaining.
Review By [Jerri] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
It was sweet. And the conversation wasn't too long. A little more physical description of the space people are standing in, maybe.. that's about it. Looking forward to seeing what you do later on -- who will flirt more with Tonks (if she is there at all)- Xander or Willow?
Comments from author:
Thanks, yeah I only thought about surroundings afterwards. So I hope to do better next chapter.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from amusewithaview
Review:
Interesting premise but you need a beta, or to look over your own work and fix up the punctuation errors. This is not meant as a 'flame,' just some constructive criticism. You have a lot of nice characterizations going - especially Willow and Andrew, you just need to invest a little more time in combing through for the little mistakes.

Danke
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lemons
Review:
I'm the first one to review!!!!
go me!!!
I love the story so please continue!!!!!!
Review By [Lemons] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lemons
Review:
I'm the first one to review!!!!
go me!!!
I love the story so please continue!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Yay you and thanks for reviewing. I'll try not to be too long with the update.
Review By [Lemons] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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