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Review of chapter "Cheater, Cheater" from dizzyspirit
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Promises, promises. Can't wait 'til they meet again. Alec is so very delicious. Keep it up.
Review By [dizzyspirit] • Date [18 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spy Vs. Spy" from dizzyspirit
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I like the way you started the story but you killed Buffy and that I am not sure I can ever forgive. Buffy is my favorite character of all time. Still, that aside, it's pretty good the way you chose to mix the three worlds. I'm not sure I believe that Logan would leave Neptune because he was dumped but I can see why he might have to get away from a town that loves his father. I like the pairing of Dawn and Logan though I would have never thought she would be his type. She's not as snarky as they usually are. But maybe time has made her that way. I also like the way Alec seems to be looking to fight Dawn at the end of this chapter. It fits him. Doing good but I think you can do even better. Prove me right.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry for the killing Buffy thing but I wanted people to know that she won't be popping up to save her little sister. On the contrary, I want people to know that Dawn can take care of herself. In fact, it's because Buffy is dead that Dawn learned that she had to learn to take care of herself. And because of her hard work training she will live through this confrontation with Alec and be able to get to the really juicy stuff later on. Thank you so much for this, my first and only review. I really like the fact that you gave constructive criticism. It's so much better to hear that I can do better than to hear that I just plain suck. Thank you. I'll update soon now that I know that there is someone actually reading this thing. Maybe even tonight. Can't wait for the next chapter of your own story. Again, thanks.
Review By [dizzyspirit] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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