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Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I've always enjoyed the humorous touch in your stories and the way you don't feel the need to shoehorn explanations in. Very funny and enjoyable.
Comments from author:
Many thanks - I hope everything was reasonably clear from context, I'm trying to avoid info-dumps where possible.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [2 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
The idea of Dumbledore and Kendra being related is a bit of a stretch, but it’s an interesting idea nevertheless- and you definitely come up with a plausible explanation for it-, and subsequent confusion as both sides try to claim Kendra’s body was kind of amusing, even if I think that the Slayers in particular should have been SLIGHTLY more willing to exercise patience after examples of past impulsive behaviour nearly caused so much trouble...

Still, the conclusion was satisfying, the reasons for the two organisations remaining separate allies certainly works, and the explanation for them losing touch makes sense; keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Many thanks - I had a lot of fun with that one. Once I found out about the HP Kendra it was inevitable someone would want to write that version of their relationship, I'm just pleased I got there first.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from lunalurker
Review:
A very fun read. Taking an entirely plausible off-screen plot thread and running with it hard and fast into supernatural comedy and action movie territory. Fantastic!
A round of applause for the author. Thank you for writing and sharing with us. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you liked it!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from theraceskong
Review:
This was very enjoyable read. The voices of all the characters sounded true and they had believable interactions with each other. I liked both Rita's near death and her final end. Great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks - I also killed her in Bring Me The Head of Harry Potter, if you like that sort of thing...
Review By [theraceskong] • Date [5 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from Vigdis
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This story is excellent. Everyone seems to be in (canon) character and the interactions are very believable. The pace is perfect. I hated to leave it, even for a few minutes, before I reached the end. And that was a remarkably creative way of dealing with Rita! I love it!
Comments from author:
It seemed a nice "poetic justice" ways to get rid of a character who can turn into an insect - in Bring Me The Head of Harry Potter I had her eaten by someone who had temporarily been transformed into a newt; it would have been a toad, but of course Willow doesn't like frogs and toads...
Review By [Vigdis] • Date [29 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from Bluejello
Review:
Wonderful! I'll admit that both the "stakes on a plane" and bug-zapper bits made me giggle. Thank you!
Comments from author:
Thanks - hope you liked it enough to vote for it in the COA!
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [27 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
has too be the best Harry/Buffy crossover I've ever read loved the death of Rita and just about all other aspects of the story.
Comments from author:
Apparently I'm not the first author to have killed Rita that way, though I never read the earlier story - can't remember the details, but there's a link to the earlier story somewhere in the version I've posted on Fanfiction.net
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [18 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from TheHunter
Review:
That last line made me lol...Finlay someone killed off that bitch
Comments from author:
The weird part is that someone else had apparently used the same method in another story (not on TTH).

Actually I killed her in Bring Me The Head of Harry Potter too, although it happens more or less off-stage.
Review By [TheHunter] • Date [7 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Started reading this one and it seemed very familiar, so I checked the reviews and sure enough, I had.

Still a great story.

James, who initially didn't want to look like an idiot for reading the same story twice. ;O
Comments from author:
Thanks! BTW, why is this a private review?
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from Scrappychic
Review:
Wonderful story! Thank you for taking the time to write and post it.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from Vorax
Review:
This was great.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Vorax] • Date [1 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from DavidFraser
Review:
I feel sad that I just forgot about Kendra and what might have happened to her remains. Feeling a lot better now that she will be properly remembered in Fan Fiction.

A great read - even for a non-HP fan.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [16 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from BrendanM
Review:
Great Fic!

It was very entertaining.
Comments from author:
It's one of my favourites. Glad you liked it.
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [15 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from banner
Review:
That was fun from beginning to end. You did a great job with characterization. Everyone Makes Sense. I *love* what you did to Skeeter - she really needed to die. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Everyone seems to like that scene - one day I really must write her as a sympathetic character ;-)

Incidentally, she suffers a different fate in Bring Me The Head of Harry Potter.
Review By [banner] • Date [27 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XVII – The Secret Keeper" from fpb
Review:
This is brilliant. The cleverest account of the wider Wizarding-Muggle-Slayer interaction I have ever seen, a pleasant and surprising climax, and pace and invention up the wazoo. Sir, you are going on my list of favourite authors.
Comments from author:
Many thanks. Afraid it may be a while before I post anything else, I'm in the middle of a games design project that's eating my writing time, but I'm not giving up on fanfic.
Review By [fpb] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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