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Review of chapter "Deals a Deal" from bradsan
Review:
please more, they are so relaxing and fun to read. and I like Nick and Buffy pairing.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deals a Deal" from serenityselena
Review:
nice story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deals a Deal" from anyanka
Review:
“Country music and fun? Those are non-mixy things and what’s really fun about dancing in a line to some old guy whining about loosing his beat up Chevy?” Buffy rambled off her questions while her full lower lip pouted.

No offense, but I'm with Buffy on this one. Fun story, Lisa! I can't wait for the next installment!
Comments from author:
No offense taken sweetie. While I enjoy country music not such a fan of the old whiney stuff. I.E. lost my car, woman and dog all in same day.

Glad you are enjoying! Thanks for the feedback sweets! xoxo
Review By [anyanka] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cowboy Hero" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Wait! Why'd he crumple into unconsciousness? How can you leave it/us there!? The next section doesn't even explain. *pouts* That's reader abuse!

My quibble aside I liked the mental explanations Nick gave himself. I.E. his reason for following a cute blonde into a deserted corridor and the reason she was there. It was nice insight without detracting from the action. Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
Blame my muse! She's jumping all over the place and I'm trying to get her to go in a nice timeline but she's mean and doesn't care. It is reader abuse and I apologize. *scowls at muse* But... she's got an idea for the next little drabble so hopefully that should make it better. *grins*

In all honesty, I really think I should just make this piece into a series. The muse seems to be having fun with this and she's got a lot more ideas about what she wants to do. *sigh* I blame this whole series thing on you! *pokes ya with love*
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [28 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Call of The Wild" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
"Patrolling in Vegas would be a new challenge, vampires wouldn’t stick to the cemeteries, not with this many happy meals on legs."

I never quite understood vampires hanging out in cemeteries unless they were newly risen. I mean there aren't many people in them after dark and while I sort of understood living in crypts: again I wonder why they didn't just kill someone and squat in their homes until they turned up missing. *shrugs*

My own little mental musings aside I enjoyed the imagery of this section. Your attention to detail was refreshing for a drabble and the last line cinched it for me. Nicely paced and beautifully rendered.
Comments from author:
Neither have I. You'd think back alleys would be more their stomping ground. You know, grab a random walker and pull them into the dark then bite 'em. Vamps are confusing little or large things. My muse plans on having fun with the Vegas Vamps. *grins*

Okay I know I've done good with detail when you make a note about it. You are the detail queen.

Thank you so much hun for leaving a review, as always I love getting your insight. xoxo
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [28 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "My Reprieve" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
I liked how you called Buffy and Faith the original Slayers. It's always enjoyable to see/read Buffy placing them on equal footing and not at each others throats. The bit about the City of Sin being a fresh start I enjoyed immensely and found it a little humorous especially if you consider the comics canon and she came to Las Vegas with Pike after Lothos. Is Pike possibly still in town? *innocent smile*
Comments from author:
Yeah, as you know I think B/F would be close friends after Season 7 of Buffy. I think they'd find the balance that their relationship lacked previous years. Personally, I don't consider the comics canon and I haven't read any of them. As for Pike... I'm thinking no but my muse is evil so you never know. lol.

Thanks for reading and leaving a review sweetie, I appreciate hearing what you think and ideas. *mwah*
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [28 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deals a Deal" from DeeRose
Review:
You posted more *bounces* I think I enjoy this series more each time I read it. While I do so like the drabble format, I think I would be forced to send you cookies if you would write longer chapters. I'll even let you pick what kind of cookies :-)

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I did post more! *grins* I'm so glad I'm keeping you hooked enough to keep coming back for more! You should be pleased to know the muse is looking at me with that look. The one that says she's getting tired of the drabbles and wants to write a bigger piece. She's a pain. lol Cookies you say? I do enjoy cookies! Between the baked goods and the muse you may get a longer piece.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback, means a lot.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [27 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deals a Deal" from zigpal
Review:
This is a fun little bit of drabbles between Buffy and Nick. Great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review, it's really appreciated. *Grins*

I'm having a lot fun writing these drabbles and it is making my muse long to write a longer piece. Again, thanks.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [27 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Deals a Deal" from DeeRose
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I am a huge fan of this pairing, and I think you've captured them so well together. Nick is a total sweetheart (and George is jut *hot*), just what Buffy needs... a nice guy who won't be taken advantage of. I look forward to reading more of this....

oh... and sweaty sparing sounds good (and I do totally mean that as a euphemism).

Dee
Comments from author:
Me too! Love this pairing and there needs to be more stuff out there featuring them as a couple. George is a full on stud-muffin and his character Nick is 100% sweetheart. I'm having fun with the drabbles and hoping that this will urge my muse into a full on piece.

Thanks so much for reading and for leaving feedback, much appreciated.

Sweaty sparing? I'll see what I can do. *grins*
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [25 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deals a Deal" from Demongirl
Review:
*squeals*

One question: if you finished these fics five days ago, why did you not bring the loveliness to us earlier? :-P.
Comments from author:
Erm... because I'm evil? lol I'm trying to post them as soon as they are finished. Like today I posted My Reprieve & Call of The Wild but they are set before the other drabbles so I had to play with the order. Never done a series of drabbles like this before. Anyway, where was I going with this? Check the Story summary because I'll let you know what I've added since I'll be re-ordering so they flow.

Glad you are still reading. Good to know I'm holding your interest.
Review By [Demongirl] • Date [24 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Water Wars" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Of course Aaron would be soaked and he's a brave boy facing off against the mighty Slayer. It's always nice to see Buffy doing domestic things and I'm enjoying the lack of violence so far. Of course I wouldn't be opposed to a little sweaty sparing and I surprisingly don't mean that as a euphemism.

Review love feeds the muse. *hands the plot bunny a carrot* Consider me intrigued.
Comments from author:
I'm sure violence will eventually come. But thus far nothing has sparked the muse. Do you want some sweaty sparing because you just googled him? *smirks* I'm sure I can work that in there somehow for you.

The muse is working on another one right now. *plot bunny chomps down greedily* Ooo... I've intrigued you? Yay! I'll get the muse working on some more for ya.

Thanks so much for the review hun, much appreciated.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [23 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little Blue Monster" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Personally I'm a fan of Grover but I suppose Cookie Monster is an acceptable substitution. ;)

This was very cute and I've been informed that Nick is like a hotter version of Xander (more sarcasm, less spastic movements) so now the connection between him and Buffy makes more sense. I'm all a giggle with Buffy being roped into chaperoning another group of trick or treaters. Here's to hoping things are less exciting this time around.

Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
I adore Grover but had to do the monster for the piece to work. What was the book called with Grover... about not turning the page because there was a monster at the end of the book. *grins* I loved that book as a kid.

Definitely sarcastic and not all spastic. His grin could melt... well just go google George Eads and you should understand. *winks*

Thanks for taking the time to read and leave feedback sweetie. *mwah*
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [23 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Water Wars" from Demongirl
Review:
Buffy and Nick! Hurrah!
Comments from author:
*bounces* I know I love them together! I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for the review sweetie!
Review By [Demongirl] • Date [23 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Water Wars" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I am really liking this. Hope to see more soon. Buffy/Nick just fit I think.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I kinda think they fit together as well and more will come. I have another one ready just need to load it up when I get home from work. Again, thanks so much for reading and leaving a review, much appreciated!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [23 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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