This fic was seriously made of win up through and including chapter 6. The jovial nature was awesome. It took a darker turn there in 7 and 8, and was still rather entertaining, but it lost a lot of the jovial feel, and there was something else lost too, but I can't put my finger on it.
Anyway, I very much enjoyed the read. The summary nature, delving only into key bits, was used with artistry and poise. I look forward to a sequel.
Review By [ordieth] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Ooo ooh *raises hand and dances in seat* I care! I care! Who needs superpowers when you have intellect and lots and lots of drive? Oh and Owen must not forget Owen.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [27 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yes, I care. I'm finding this a fascinating alternate view of season 2. It's particularly interesting, because David Xanatos (at least in the earlier season of "Gargoyles") seemed almost the opposite of Xander Harris: all brains and ambition, with little or no heart. Combining the two of them into a sort of composite character makes for interesting possibilities. Plus, more Puck/Owen is always fun.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]