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Review of chapter "Chapter I: Willow" from Gideon
Review:
Intriguing. That is a lot of detail on just Willow's character. A pity you haven't come back and done a chapter for Xander or Buffy.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Willow" from SAK
Review:
Please update again soon
Comments from author:
No promises. Got three ficlettes to post sometime. I'll explain why then.
Review By [SAK] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Willow" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on this, hope to read more soon.
Will there be any pairing in this story?
Comments from author:
Thanks! I've actually got most of the next chapter for this written, but I need to transfer it over to my laptop and edit out the bugs. When I get more stuck on IND I'll probably do it, but since I've been on a bit of a roll with it, I'm going to try to keep my muse on task.

As for pairings, W/X G/Je B/? though I'm considering B/R.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Willow" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
Excellent story so far. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I've got most of the next chapter written, I've just got to transfer it to my laptop and round it out. It'll Probably get posted sometime in the next month, depending on how much trouble I have writing chapter three for IND.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [18 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Willow" from Infinix
Review:
Hmm, a Xander/Willow pairing? Inuyasha's ears aren't all that different than a diclonus' horns.
Comments from author:
That's actually the reason she won't tear him to pieces the first time he insults her. :)
Review By [Infinix] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Willow" from cwolf
Review:
*shakes head* chapter two didn't tell me anything about what Willow dressed as either. Now a disclaimer saying what the series is, generally helps...
Comments from author:
If you'll go back and read the opening Author's Note, you'll see that I identified what she is (Diclonius), what Anime it's from (Elfen Lied), and where to find information on these things (Wikipedia.com). The Anime is also mentioned in the disclaimer. As for not explaining more about Lucy, this is more a fix for the ending of Elfen Lied, because they never really say what happens to her in the series. Sorry for the confusion, but I'm not really familiar enough with the series to give a good background for Lucy/Nyu (Again, see author's note)

In any case thanks for your review.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Willow" from war
Review:
never watched elfen lied so I looked it up,damn that is one dangerous unstable girl.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I: Willow" from Bobboky
Review:
:)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from darkprinncess
Review:
I love it a lot and you must update soon
Review By [darkprinncess] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from war
Review:
well after reading your fic I went out and got the first 3 dvd's of Trinity Blood and after watching them I have to say it should be interesting to see Asran and Inuyasha interacting.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
That's the sort of thing I love to hear. Personally, I'm enjoying writing that part too.
Review By [war] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great start.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [2 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Infinix
Review:
Maybe it's just me but I didn't see any problem with Xander's joke. Really hope this doesn't turn into a Xander-bashing story.
Comments from author:
he just said the wrong thing at the wrong time. Sorta like Inuyasha . . .
Review By [Infinix] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from war
Review:
nice start looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like ths start of your story. I look forward to seeing where you take this mutated Helloween. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from KnightWulf
Review:
it's good can't wait till the next chapter could be interesting what will happen to them and all.
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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