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Review of chapter "Lost Opportunities" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
This seems rather unfair to Buffy - was she somehow *required* to date Michael, and thus shirked her "responsibility" to do so? And they didn't even *ask* her to come along with them - they very deliberately kept that a secret. Just because she had issues with dating him doesn't mean she wouldn't have come along on the Great Santa Carla Vampire Hunt (Take 2), but they'll never know because they kept her in the dark about it, then blamed her for not participating in it. Good job, Scoobies.
Comments from author:
I do not claim that the behavior or reactions - for any of them - is fair or right. I'm not aiming for fair, I'm aiming for realistic emotions.

Buffy freaking out over another guy with vampire-traits - not fair, but hopefully realistic.
Micheal getting all hurt, angsty and doing something reckless - hurt feelings at someone freaking out about something are normal, and I don't know anybody who can walk that hasn't at least once done something reckless because they were all emotional.
Xander blaming Buffy - lots of people blame others for things that happen, even if they had no control over it, no intention for that, or no clue that such things happen. Not right, but also canon.

There's a lot of things that seem unfair towards Buffy. I do not intend to give the idea that she is required to date anybody, or that she isn't allowed to get upset at things.

I want to give the idea that when people get upset (and they are allowed to get upset) they might do stupid/reckless things. And get angry, and maybe yell at people. Not that this is good behavior, just that it happens.

Though I fully stand by my idea that the PTB would try to play with Buffy and everybody elses' emotions and goals like puppets on strings.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [6 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost Hopes" from Harry
Review:
Sounds like we are developing a split within the PTB over how to treat Buffy. One group wants to treat her as a toy, something to be manipulated as a item for their pleasure. Another group wants to do what they can to help her. Looks like Michael took one option, help out in what ways he can, be it as a human or as a vampire.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost Opportunities" from Harry
Review:
B, YOU BLEW IT! You let your ego get the better of you AGAIN! Mom can't help you this time. You need to do some serious searching and figure out how to change that attitude of yours!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost Opportunities" from moglwi
Review:
I enjoyed the story but I thought Xander with is usual lack of luck with girlfriend's would have understood how Buffy was feeling.
Review By [moglwi] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bad Plans in Action" from Eureka
Review:
OK So David should be dead this time cause Wood and all, BUT is everyone else going to be OK? Specially since you know getting pierced himself....
Review By [Eureka] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bad Plans in Action" from Harry
Review:
Sounds like the battle plan hit the fan and got spit out! They should have gotten help from Giles and/or B. Even Faith, if she was ariound would be a welcome sight! Now, they have one member of the team that may be dying and the Scoobies may be next!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Dumb Plan" from Harry
Review:
It may be a dumb plan, but this is one that might have a chance at working. Now, lets get the team together, and take care of bussiness.
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Dumb Plan" from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Enjoying the story.

I enjoyed Lost Boys but the end of the movie always bothered me, precisely because the David's impaling on antlers, because antlers are bone, not wood. Like how you have used that theme in this story.

Can't wait to see Xander try to convince Oz and Willow to go along with the self-proclaimed "stupid plan"
Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ugly Revelations" from Harry
Review:
I KNEW IT! knew that Michael's passt would affect B! Nowq, lets see how things go from here.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Walk in the Dark" from Harry
Review:
Well, MIchael dd some good this night. But, I suspect problems in the future.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Warning Michael" from Harry
Review:
Michael, that was not Giles giving you that warning: THAT WAS THE RIPPER!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost the Laughter" from Harry
Review:
Micahel, in Sunnydale, you either make friends, or you end up as Vamp food. Take up the offer with Xander before he lets it go.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who's the Guy?" from Harry
Review:
Well, it sounds like Michael and B are hitting it off fairly well. Lets see how long this works out though.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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WQell, it sounds like David is going to have to hope to eithe find a cure, or find a way to keep the Vampire side of him under control. I just hope that B does not decide to STAKE him!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ugly Revelations" from Eureka
Review:
So Buffy not taking it very well Huh? Is/Can she help him to stay human?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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