very cool!

I think you should write more to this, it is good

That is so cool. I love the formal wording. Willow does 'wise Greek sorceress' so well. Only nitpick I have is that a Greek (and Sparta was a Grecian city-state, though we usually think of Athens when we hear Greek) wouldn't have accepted a supposedly Greek sorceress too well. Sorcery was seen as a foreign thing, practiced by Persians and Egyptians. The only Greek sorceress in legends was Medea... and look how she turned out.

Still, love it!

This is listed in the wrong category. You should change it to "300, Frank Miller's". The classification "300 Spartans, The" is only for fics based on the 1962 movie "The 300 Spartans".

this is a pretty sweet idea and you presented it well.

Different.. but I liked it.

I like your idea. do you think you'll ever flush it out? make it longer? It's quite good.

I have an odd dilemma in reviewing this.

It is sweetly written and a pleasure to read.

But...

In my head I was running the movie as I read, and Willow just doesn't seem to fit in. I suspect its because she kills so easily whereas I believe she would be horrified with the massive loss of life that occurred in this battle. Healing and advising, yes; killing, no.

That said, I don't have any problem with the level of power you've given her, since it fits in with the both the movie and the mythology.

Wicked! Now I have to see the movie.

Nice. :)

Great!!!

My only problem with your nice story was Willow seemed a bit out of character. I could easily see her raising the wall of stone and doing all the talking with the major players, but she killed so many Persians. It seemed she went very Dark Side of the Force in your story with no fallout. I know it is just a short story, and I did like your story, but I would have like seeing Willow use her minds and wits more than all the killing curses. I still give it two thumbs up.

I love the last line :)

AWESOMENESS! *giggles* Poor Andrew. I love him, but he totally had that coming. It's interesting and fun to read, if only you had gone into more detail. It's a nice oneshot, but it would have been an awesomer series. ^_^ I loved it! To Hell with anyone who doesn't like it!

cool...too bad Willow didn't become Darth Willow&went postal on the Persian army...remember she could had used the lifeforce of the Persians to power herself back to the future...also how come she didn't get any action with any of the Spartans considering her&Kennedy's reaction from the movie...