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Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from Erica
Review:
very cool!
Review By [Erica] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from Red
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I think you should write more to this, it is good
Review By [Red] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from Kieranfoy
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That is so cool. I love the formal wording. Willow does 'wise Greek sorceress' so well. Only nitpick I have is that a Greek (and Sparta was a Grecian city-state, though we usually think of Athens when we hear Greek) wouldn't have accepted a supposedly Greek sorceress too well. Sorcery was seen as a foreign thing, practiced by Persians and Egyptians. The only Greek sorceress in legends was Medea... and look how she turned out.

Still, love it!
Review By [Kieranfoy] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
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This is listed in the wrong category. You should change it to "300, Frank Miller's". The classification "300 Spartans, The" is only for fics based on the 1962 movie "The 300 Spartans".
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [21 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from ironrose
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this is a pretty sweet idea and you presented it well.
Review By [ironrose] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from RavenMorbisk
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Different.. but I liked it.
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from fairybloom
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I like your idea. do you think you'll ever flush it out? make it longer? It's quite good.
Review By [fairybloom] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from (Past Donor)Jewel
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I have an odd dilemma in reviewing this.

It is sweetly written and a pleasure to read.

But...

In my head I was running the movie as I read, and Willow just doesn't seem to fit in. I suspect its because she kills so easily whereas I believe she would be horrified with the massive loss of life that occurred in this battle. Healing and advising, yes; killing, no.

That said, I don't have any problem with the level of power you've given her, since it fits in with the both the movie and the mythology.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from Sandi
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Wicked! Now I have to see the movie.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from (Moderator)Saturn
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Nice. :)
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from WinterRayne
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Great!!!
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from CPTSkip
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My only problem with your nice story was Willow seemed a bit out of character. I could easily see her raising the wall of stone and doing all the talking with the major players, but she killed so many Persians. It seemed she went very Dark Side of the Force in your story with no fallout. I know it is just a short story, and I did like your story, but I would have like seeing Willow use her minds and wits more than all the killing curses. I still give it two thumbs up.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from MistofRainbows
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I love the last line :)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from Jorrie
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AWESOMENESS! *giggles* Poor Andrew. I love him, but he totally had that coming. It's interesting and fun to read, if only you had gone into more detail. It's a nice oneshot, but it would have been an awesomer series. ^_^ I loved it! To Hell with anyone who doesn't like it!
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from Inquisitor
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cool...too bad Willow didn't become Darth Willow&went postal on the Persian army...remember she could had used the lifeforce of the Persians to power herself back to the future...also how come she didn't get any action with any of the Spartans considering her&Kennedy's reaction from the movie...
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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