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Review of chapter "Secret Meetings" from Oxnate
Review:
Good start. I hope you come back to finish this sometime.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret Meetings" from Innogen
Review:
So sorry my review doesn't review quite well in rhyme,
Yet I hope you soon return to this story sublime,
Tragedy strikes in family, horrible stress and sadness
Creates all around; I empathize, I relate, I fall below all floors
Esteem creates, knowing that the journey up the stairs
Step by Step, long, hard, arduous. I hope your heart-struck
Wound is healing.

This story is one I love so; I hope you return to it with fresh vigor, for
Well written and thought out it is. Much attention to detail you attend,
Description abounds, inner thoughts expressed well, and characters
Fully described, and detailed.

Please start writing. Look again, for your Muse is awaiting.

~Innogen
Review By [Innogen] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret Meetings" from GypsyWitch
Review:
I'm very sorry to hear about your brother passing away, even though it's been a few years doesn't mean the pain isn't still fresh at times. Again, it's been a couple years but I just wanted to let you know this is a great story and I'd love to read more. I hope maybe sometime you'll start writing it again and update new chapters, it's a very intriguing story!
Review By [GypsyWitch] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secret Meetings" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
First off.... I'm so very sorry for your loss. I so completely understand how hard it is to lose a family member. And while it will always be hard and often sad. It will, however, get easier. Because they will ALWAYS be in your heart and soul. And someday, the sun will shine brightly again, and the pain will lessen. But until that day comes, just keep on remembering the love and how blessed you were to have them in your life... Also, as cliche as it sounds, remember that your brother is in a better place- He is now surrounded by God and all his Angels, basking in that pure love and comfort and warmth...

With that said... It was a good chapter. Made all the better because you were able to write in the midst of all your grief.... I pray that you will find the solace you need to help you through this trying time.

My sincerest sympathies and most heartfelt condolences to you and your family...

May God Bless You and your family....
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [25 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secret Meetings" from justapiranha
Review:
I am truly sorry to here of your loss.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [23 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secret Meetings" from RevDorothyL
Review:
My heartfelt sympathy to you and your entire family over this tragic loss. Thank you so much for taking the time to update this fic when your own life has been turned upside down.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [23 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secret Meetings" from pcgal
Review:
This story has been excellent so far. I am a huge Cordy fan and I like what you are doing w/her character. I can't wait for Buffy and Cordy to meet Mal and the gang!

Please update soon!
Review By [pcgal] • Date [22 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Docks and Badgers" from jammincat
Review:
Great story but please speed up the chapters too much time in between updates.
Review By [jammincat] • Date [8 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Docks and Badgers" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Can't wait for Badger's little social gathering! Should be lots of fun.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Your Mission, Should You Choose To Accept It" from Tempi
Review:
Interesting chapter. Your story is picking up pace, so I'll be looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
I am so glad to hear that you are enjoying the story. Life had the story ground to a halt for a few months but I hope now to be able to do more of a regular updates. I like so many hate to really get into a story and then have to wait forever for an update all the while hoping the writer hasn't given up.

I really hope that you continue to enjoy the story and again thank you for the review.

Aerialla
Review By [Tempi] • Date [5 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Your Mission, Should You Choose To Accept It" from spk
Review:
Great update. I loved the playfulness of the relationship between Buffy and Methos. I like how you're writing Cordelia's character...normally I can't stand her, but you're one of the few writers that can make me like her. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review, especially for liking the way that I am portraying Codelia. I have always felt in fanfiction that she has gotten a bad image. Yeah on Buffy she may have been Queen C the uber beyotch but she changed. She is one of the few characters on Buffy or Angel that really grew as a character. It still ticks me off the way they did her story line for season four.

I hope that you continue to enjoy the story just as much and feel free to comment on any chapter, even if there is something that you don't like. I view constructive criticism better than a lot of fanfiction wriiters that I have seen, I take it and use it to make me a better writer.

Again thank you so much

Aerialla
Review By [spk] • Date [4 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Old Lover Comes Walking In" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Methos was in interesting addition. Did you intend to have the whole text in italic?
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review and for letting me know that the chapter was in italics. I didn't have a clue. I really hope that you keep reading and enjoying the story.

Aerialla
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Old Lover Comes Walking In" from gigi
Review:
Glad to see a new chapter up. Good stuff. Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I really want to have another chapter up this week. Moving into a new house is going to be such a pain so I want to work really hard this week in getting work done on the story. I hope you keep reading and enjoying.

Aerialla
Review By [gigi] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Old Lover Comes Walking In" from spk
Review:
Oh yeah!! So happy to see Methos brought into the story. I just love him with Buffy. Can't wait to read more. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so very much. I think Methos is going to add a nice bit of spice to the story, he always has a way of mixing things up while trying hard to stay out of trouble. There will be more soon. Keep reading and enjoying.

Aerialla
Review By [spk] • Date [17 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Wedding And A Vortex" from lilcutie
Review:
please update i love it... u had me crying
Comments from author:
Please don't cry. It gets better I promise. While I can't promise that there will be no more parts that make you cry I hope to also brings so laughs and some verbal yelling at the screen. I hope you continue to read and enjoy and thank you so much for your comment.

Aerialla
Review By [lilcutie] • Date [6 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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