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Review of chapter "A cry for help" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Fun connection - I like them all being related :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from heyu
Review:
I'm really enjoying this storyline. Are the Elders ever going to ask Xander for the favored owed? He did promise anything and the Elders aren't always the nicest people.

Please add to the series.

Thanks
Comments from author:
Uhhh, probably not. Unless the world is ending, they won't bother. *snicker*
Review By [heyu] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from Netchka
Review:
Love it!
Comments from author:
I'm glad and thanks for the review. :)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from FireWolfe
Review:
Ok this xander fic I love. I so want to see that demon invasion lol. It be kind of fun the charmed ones could just sit back and watch lol.
Comments from author:
I'm working on making a series of shorts with this, at the very least. And yeah, I think the Charmed Ones will be ... entertained, by what happens WHEN the dinner is interrupted. *chuckle*
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [19 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from spring
Review:
short, but I love it.
Review By [spring] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from MichelleWinchester
Review:
I got all misty-eyed at your Xander's emotion, then even more when it urned out the slayer was five and trying to save her 'papa'!!
Great work! I hope you return with more with how he's related to the Charmed Ones, and how he interacts with them! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I've actually been working on the tie in a bit lately, it's still not ready yet, but I'll keep trying until I get it right. :)
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [8 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from (Recent Donor)LordMesron
Review:
I loved it! Please, please write more of this!

What is this pen pals series you mention below, though?
Comments from author:
:) Thank you! It just so happens that my muse has been bugging me about this one lately, so maybe I'll have something for it before too much longer. I am seriously thinking of making it part of my Pen Pals universe eventually too. *vbg*

Oh, that's on FF.net and as soon as I get more of it written, I'll bring it over here to TtH. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)LordMesron] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from Wauzi
Review:
Nice story so far! I look hopefully at "(for now)". Keep up the work!

Wauzi
Comments from author:
I will revisit this universe, just probably not anytime soon. :(

Between other stories already in progress that need attention and helping out here at my inlaws since the hubby's dad had surgery, canning tomatoes (If I never see another tomato it won't bother me a bit!) and a myriad of other issues, I'm luckly to get anything written at all.

Most of my writing is done while sitting at the doctor's office, waiting on my mother-in-law to have her cancer treatments. Those can take all day and we go two days a week. Then that needs to get typed up from the notebook.

All I can say is, I'll try real hard. Okay? :)
Review By [Wauzi] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from Blackguard
Review:
cool fic, love the whole Xander being related to the Charmed ones, that's always a fun angle. also cool to see back into the writing again, any chance of seeing more of goodbye and hello soon?
Comments from author:
I'm trying to be different with Xander being Victor's son, but yeah, still fun, regardless. Never a dull moment on the Halliwell household, even when the family members aren't named Halliwell.

Thanks, it's good to be back after such a long dry spell. *glaring at muse now*

*chuckle* I was just looking at some of my notes for that one yesterday and will see what I can do. *vbg*
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [9 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from Bill
Review:
Great start!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and the rating. I"m glad you liked it. :)
Review By [Bill] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from purrfus
Review:
Really good, needs a little more in the way of details.

More in this particular 'verse would be appreciated.
Comments from author:
Well, it's a ficlet meant to stand alone, but I'm gonna try to tie it into Pen Pals eventually. :)

Thanks very much for the review and the rating, especially since not everyone rates when they review. :)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from kaleecat
Review:
Interesting. I can clearly see Xander and his little slayer. It would be nice to have the backstory someday -- when & how did Xander find out that Victor is his father, that the Charmed Ones are his sisters? Half-sisters?? How do they meet? Is Xander a witch, and Leo his whitelighter, or is he not from Halliwell blood and Leo came as his brother-in-law/friend? A lot of potential if you choose to go for it.
Comments from author:
He's Victor's son with Jessica Harris, so Leo came as his brother-in-law/friend.

I'm seriously thinking about tying this into Pen Pals, working on linking parts now and they'll be longer. Thanks so much for the review! :)
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A cry for help" from periskyye
Review:
Pretty cool... I'll have to see if this is a part of a larger series...
Comments from author:
I'm seriously considering trying to make it a part of the planned "Pen Pal" series. :)
Review By [periskyye] • Date [8 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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