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Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Fantastic :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - The Eternal Key" from Downery
Review:
Cool beans. Wish Xander got to hook up with Dawn though. I refuse to acknowledge the crap they used in AtS about Rome so in my mind Dawn might be a virgin or barely experienced. Wish she got to bed her highschool crush at least before she died.
Review By [Downery] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from Mordare
Review:
Really great story line. I hope you decide to continue it some day.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from Markelo
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All of the characters are iC. I love the part of Xander being an Immortal. I feel bad for Methos having to handle two girls who are overprotive over Xander and are so sure of themselves that they treat everyone as if they were kids.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [17 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from redhandgrunt
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Good so far. I wonder if you will bring in some of the other mystical events that Xander has experienced. Like Vampire Xander or the split in two Xanders. Then of course there's the Indian spirit that gave him Syphilis or aftereffects from the Love Spell.
Review By [redhandgrunt] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from Ladeia
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Just started reading this story and am hooked. I hope to see more soon.
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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--"Apparently there were some legal problems with the city because of a bunch of loose threads, so Sandburg hired a top lawyer and got things straightened out by suing the publisher, the University and his own mother. It turns out that she was the one who sent his dissertation to the publisher without permission, only now he was calling it a rough draft of a possible work of fiction whose main character he modeled after Ellison. The publisher had published and promoted his unfinished book without permission or a contract. He claimed the University had fired him and removed him from the PhD program without just cause since they knew what his dissertation was supposed to be and he had yet to turn it into his review committee."

--"It had been, to all intents and purposes, a media circus and Sandburg came out smelling like a victimized rose instead of being labeled a fraud. He had then entered Washington State University’s PhD program and defended his dissertation about closed societies and was awarded his Doctorial Degree."


Whoa! Excellent epilogue :D

That's what... 176 words of your opinion of what should have happened? Your idea, right?

If you expanded that out into prose format, say 400-900 words, and posted it as a stand-alone non-crossover under the heading of 'Sentinel - A Much Needed Epilogue' or somesuch... I'd be very very happy :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from Bobboky
Review:
very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from kaleecat
Review:
you've nailed buffy & willow's likely attitudes well. I particularly enjoyed this chapter for Methos' remembering of how he came to be there; with deep appreciation for the fact that after willow & buffy proved that they can't see xander at all, Giles stepped in and showed that he *does* see Xander. The glimpse of Methos and Xander's time in Africa was interesting as well.

The interaction between Jim, Blair and the visitors isn't quite as engaging since it is seen in retrospect. I do hope there will be some first-hand interaction (dialogue etc) coming up. I'm also looking forward to buffy & willow having a clue-by-four driven home. Xander's first fight with an immortal is certainly going to be interesting.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from Bill
Review:
Welcome to Methos' nightmare!
Review By [Bill] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from Caliadragon
Review:
Poor Methos stuck trying to guard Xander from the Ditzy Twins. I really like this story and look forward to seeing what will happen next.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - The Sentinel" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Don't like Willow much do you? You've beaten that dead horse a few too many times in my book. The rest of the story is sort of interesting though.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Adjustment Period" from TTrunks
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Most excellent, a kinda pitty any immortal who goes after Xander on a full moon. Just a quick question, if the slayer, and the hyena want to hunt does that mean Xander will be mroe driven to do so, eventually becomeing like a caged animal, or are the drives to hunt different, one for the hyena, the slayer mroe of a protect hunt thing?
Review By [TTrunks] • Date [25 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Adjustment Period" from MrPowell
Review:
good story so far. Wondering what happens next.
Review By [MrPowell] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Adjustment Period" from Selanay
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This is such an interesting concept for a story. I'm really enjoying this so far and love the choices for your crossovers. Great job! Can't wait for more!
Review By [Selanay] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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