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Review of chapter "In the Cave, They Fell" from robertlisle
Review:
Great chapter. Loved how Buffy had to face the Master before she faced Master. I just love time pair-a-docks.
Comments from author:
They are fun, aren't they? Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Plans and Failures" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
just found this story and must say I'm enjoying it very much. you got the BtVS characters down and the Dr.Who crew spot on love the way your developing the characters to fit the new stitch the Dr. would so love Buffy and I think that Martha would total fall for Xander (great pairing by the way) they could both use a good shag. I see it's been almost a year since you posted an up date so heres hope a review motivates you to continue with this story.

*Hugs&Kisses*
Comments from author:
Well thank you very much! I know that's it's been a year since an update. I promise my motivation for this story is still very much there. I'm just not terribly prolific and real life seems to be interfering more and more. I have been working on Chapter Five, but I can't seem to get past my horrendous case of Writer's Block! Gah! It's very frustrating. I've re-written the damned chapter at least six times by now! But I vow, unless something horrible happens, I will absolutely finish this story. Again, thank you very, very much for your wonderful review.
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Plans and Failures" from Duskie
Review:
I love your story but what happened to the compass?
Comments from author:
Though the compass will play a bigger part in the overall story of the series, it has little bearing now. Buffy still has it, she just doesn't need it. Thank you very much for reviewing.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [17 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Plans and Failures" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
I really hope you finish this!
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I absolutely plan to. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Plans and Failures" from rivrgrl
Review:
love the whole story so far.. you blend everything together so well.. which is good because sometimes stories that are crossing verses tend to focus more on one verse and not enough of the other..

and i loved loved this bit....

"Buffy the Vampire Slayer," he said, amused, before his eyes widened in sudden realization. "You're THAT slayer?"


"You've heard of me?" Buffy asked, intrigued.


The Doctor took a big breath and opened his mouth to speak. "Nope, never have. Sorry." Then he went back to work.

you could tell he was lying.. the way his eyes widened in sudden realization to me seems like he knew of her. or maybe will in the future/past/present. time travel can get very confusing
Comments from author:
You're not wrong. Of course the Doctor would've heard of the Slayer that killed a Hellmouth. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if he knew exactly who they were from the moment he heard Buffy's name. He is fairly brilliant after all. My guess is the Doctor didn't want to tell her anything about her future and was just being funny at her expense.

Thanks for leaving me another wonderful review. As always, my ego craves them like Cookie Monster wants cookies. Which are not a sometimes food, dammit! C is for cookie and cookie is for me!
Review By [rivrgrl] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Plans and Failures" from arkeus
Review:
ah, poor Doctor and buffy.

And sad about Willow not bing super uber duper like i imagine her to be (like, blinking and teleporting martha in front of her with her cellphone).

Great work!

Edit: lol, i was kind of joking, if i ever do a fic i will severly limit willow too :p A simple limit in your case would be that willow has to create every spell herself, and not be dependant on spell already done by various gods, because alerting them of her presence in the past/future/another planet isn't of the good.
Comments from author:
Willow does have power and the confidence to use it. Her repeated use of spells is indicative of that. As for the blinking and teleporting thing. If I did that, everything would get resolved quickly. However, that's boring. Who wants to read a story when one of the protagonists snaps their fingers and makes everything better?

She's a mighty witch, our Willow, but if we make her too powerful then the story suffers. She needs to have limits and make mistakes just like everybody else. Of course, if I need someone to pull an uber spell out of the blue a la Chosen, then she's my gal. Until then though, Willow will be keeping strict control over her powers to avoid screwing up again.

Willow in season six wouldn't have hesitated to teleport people blindly just to prove she could. But the Willow of now is aware of the risks inherent in using magic like that. Because she couldn't see the people or items in question, she couldn't guarantee their safety. That's reason enough to hold back.

I hope you find that explanation to your satisfaction.

As always, thanks for the great review!
Review By [arkeus] • Date [23 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Plans and Failures" from Emeraldfire
Review:
I hope there is more soon!!!
Comments from author:
I'll do my best. Thanks for reviewing, you wonderful person you!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [23 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Plans and Failures" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Enjoying the story, but I don't think Willow would say 'heck'. The Doctor, it fits, but Willow hasn't spent her life growing up on a heckmouth ;)
Comments from author:
Y'know, I actually tried out some different phrases while writing that scene. That bit of dialogue seemed off to me as well. Unfortunately, I just couldn't hear Willow saying any of them. Maybe it's just me. To be fair though, Willow did say "heck" a lot during the first couple of seasons. In later seasons, her language did get a bit risqué. So I can see your point. I suppose my opinion of her is colored by those earlier episodes as they were the only ones I owned for a long time.

Ah heck. If the biggest fault you can find in my story is whether or not Willow says "Hell", then I'll consider this a job well done.

Thanks for another awesome review!
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [22 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Plans and Failures" from Shezzi
Review:
great chapter! please update soon, I really like this story! love xx
Comments from author:
Thanks for leaving me the wonderful review! I'm so glad you like my story and I'll do my best to get the next chapter out as soon as possible!
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [22 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cellphones and Scrying" from Emeraldfire
Review:
I love it so far, I hope there's more!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying this! I'll make sure to post more as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [4 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cellphones and Scrying" from RocksandGlass
Review:
What an odd bunch of people. Never did I think that I would read a story with vampires, goa'uld, a time lord and a slayer all in one chapter, and half of them stuck in the past too. It makes for quite an amusing read.
Comments from author:
Pulling characters from such an eclecic group of sources is by far one of the more interesting things I've ever attempted to write. I'm happy you're finding it amusing, unless of course you're referring to the fact it's so bad, that it's laughable. Either way, thanks for the review!
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cellphones and Scrying" from Keshkreature
Review:
Oooh, this is great! It's so cute, and it's the first Doctor/Buffy x-over I've read. It's very in character, with a goofy tint.
Comments from author:
That's very kind of you to say! I'm glad you're enjoying my story. Thanks for leaving such a wonderful review!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Medicine and the Doctor" from daveykins
Review:
The TARDIS is probably re-routing the mobile signal.
Comments from author:
Yeah, that works too. Awesome! I love scientific conversation!
Review By [daveykins] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cellphones and Scrying" from arkeus
Review:
Good, though it makes me wonder how come phone are working without their servers...
Comments from author:
The Doctor likes to augment the cellphones of his companions so they can keep in contact with their families, just as he did for Rose and Martha. I assume he'd do the same for the Scoobies, especially if it meant retrieving devices lost in the past. As for the technology behind it: "Mumble, mumble, molecules, and reversing the polarity of the neutron flow... in cellphones." It's a little known fact that cellphones actually have a neutron flow, but hey, that's the Doctor for you.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [arkeus] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Immutable, Flowing, and Dangerous When Disturbed" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Really liked this chapter - shame Martha didn't quite get the part about raped and killed...
Comments from author:
Yeah well, I'd say the shock of seeing a sword slowly going through a man's neck unsettled her. But don't worry, she'll get the idea shortly. Very glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I hope the next one's as well received, thanks a bunch for reviewing!
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [17 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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