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Review of chapter "Foxy Lady" from DigiSim
Review:
Jessie Brady had brown hair and eyes. Xander does too. But Greg also has the same. Does that mean there's a possibility for some Brady-cest coming up?
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing, you the reader are indeed meant to wonder if that is the case.
Review By [DigiSim] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Foxy Lady" from Scorpio
Review:
Very cool. I like the whole terminator time-travel plot. It totally works in the Buffy-verse. What's more, I so love that you pulled in Nikki Wood & little Robin. She's in so few stories, that it's great to see her in one.

Xander's got a big choice to make; change the future & hope for the best or keep the time-line the same (knowing they will win eventually even if it's after many losses). Can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your review, and rec on other story.

Yes Xander does have a big choice to make and all will be revealed once I finish my Saints story.
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Foxy Lady" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Great story.

I remember the Brady Bunch from the 70's they were sickening then too! I also remember I hated David Cassidy with a vengeance. Pity you didn't kill off DC as well as the Brady's...the world would be a better place.

*Thinks* Haven't the Exterminator Demons changed history already? By killing off the all these Brady's they will have changed the time line, who knows what changes that will bring in the future. Get a Silver Machine and fly sideways through time, its less confusing!

Tracking this now.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
I liked the Bradys as a little girl and I really liked Marcia, Cindy was the one who got on my nerves.
(I'm an eldest child)

David Cassidy was a groovy dreamboat.

Maybe the exterminator demons haven't changed history, maybe in Xanders timeline the massacre happened.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [20 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Foxy Lady" from (Current Donor)Hotpoint
Review:
Beware of changing the timeline, it's like a box of chocolates, you never know what you're gonna get ;-)
Comments from author:
Yes, timeline changing might bite everyone on the bum. Must Nikki die? But if she doesn't, then how can Buffy be called?

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hotpoint] • Date [20 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Foxy Lady" from JennyLal
Review:
Xander should stop worrying and kill Spike if he gets a chance. The future will look after itself! Marcia is getting groovier by the chapter.
Comments from author:
It is very tempting to kill the peroxide mockney.

Marcia is groovy, Jenny, very groovy.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [20 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Foxy Lady" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good number of twists. Will Greg knock up Marcia? Maybe. Will Xander change history? Maybe. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
The answers to your questions will be revealed as the chapters go on.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Foxy Lady" from AllenPitt
Review:
Hm, the stepbrother, an unexpected complication; also my guess is the exterminator demon is following him in hopes he'll lead it to her... Funny line about whether or not Xander wants to change the past. Heh.... and yeah, unfortunately Spike DID save the world a couple of times, or help to do so... he kept the coat because he was proud of killing a slayer (and that isn't exactly easy to do after all) ---but I can't blame Robin for going after him-- (I blamed Giles for lying to Buffy about it) ---
Has Crowley been interrogating Xander about info from the future? I would in his place--then send Giles a letter timed to arrive just after he goes to Sunnydale----
Comments from author:
Your guess is pretty spot on.

Crowley has been trying to interogate Xander about the future but failing to get any joy.

Thank you very much for reviewing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And its good to feel that way,girl" from Ouatic
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My opinion of Marcia is moving up; maybe it will be OK if the demon doesn't get her.


Sorry for this but it's a habit with me...

"“I know, and if you promise to keep quiet and (repeating myself I realize), not try anything, I’ll let you ring your mom at the phone box we passed down the road and warn her.” Xander tried to calm her down. “I’m the good guy, the white hat cowboy, a Jedi knight with a light saber, the U.S. Calvary and marines all rolled into one.” Oh sweet Beelzebub, Marcia was staring at him like he was insane once more. When did Star Wars get released again?"

Californians don't have "phone boxes". In the 70s we had booths but I honestly have no idea what they call those little kiosk thingies. Also, Calvary, according to Wikipedia, is outside of Jerusalem, not in the US.
Comments from author:
crap!!! I almost wrote booths but then thought - no - that can't be American. (the problems one has when one is neither British or American)

Calvary - don't feel that bad about, but thank you for pointing it out. Am correcting now.

Thank you for your review.

Glad you're giving Marcia a fair go.
Review By [Ouatic] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And its good to feel that way,girl" from (Current Donor)Hotpoint
Review:
The Brady Bunch?! Good grief

I mean it's good...

... but nevertheless good grief!

(sorry that's all I can say right now, my brain is rebelling at the concept ;-p )
Comments from author:
One can't cross with Stargate and Supernatural all the time.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hotpoint] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And its good to feel that way,girl" from JennyLal
Review:
Of course Xander could just go back in time and kill Willow before she can resurrect Buffy to stop the First getting a foothold but then we wouldn't have a genius crossover like this!
Comments from author:
Well I'd cheerfully shoot Willow, but Xander is her bestest friend so he wouldn't. But yes it does seem to be a logical idea.

Thank you very much for your review.
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And its good to feel that way,girl" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, to start a distopia future you need to kill a utopian family. Not so happy about it, but the forces that fight the supernatural weren't quite so organized in 1975, I guess.
Comments from author:
Or maybe the 1975 forces are more organised? Thank you very much for your review.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And its good to feel that way,girl" from AllenPitt
Review:
Can they make it to the big city without killing each other? Can they get another 5 dollars? saving humanity just isn't easy... Of course next up, the police need to tag Xander as the big bad mass Brady-killer.... a rep that won't help him much with Nikki...
I presume he has an address for her?
* I'm kind of surprised 'they' didn't send more than one person through by the way--
Comments from author:
Of course they're gonna make it to New York alive!

5 dollars, maybe Xander can make Marcia busk. "Sunshine day." people would pay her to stop.

Thank you very much for your review
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Me and my whole world" from GeekGoddess
Review:
Actually I never for a minute suspected that Jessie is named after Xanders' friend....if you are familiar with the BradyWorld Marshas' daughter is named Jessica and her last name should be Logan.

Not fond of Marsha...always more of a Jan fan....would of been funnier if this story was about Jan...good start on a story about the center of the universe known as Marsha.
Comments from author:
Jessica is the perfect name choice to confuse everyone. Xander's mother is called Jessica, and his best friend was called Jesse and as you point out Marcia herself, clearly likes that name.

Whose the Daddy? I know and in a few chapters so shall you.

Jan is too young to give birth to a military leader, sadly. It would be squicky.

Thank you very much for reviewing.
Review By [GeekGoddess] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Me and my whole world" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Me and my whole world" from Cali
Review:
Interesting. Never considered Xander going back in time to the 60-70 era hunting a demon. Love the way you have Xander acting similar, but less rashly than John Connor's father in the 1st Terminator movie. Also, love the way you have inferences to an Apolcapyse by the First Evil taking more power. Little sad by the fact the rest of the Sunnydale survivors are dead. Wish that you had mentioned Angel's group's status, but I guess they would be dead. I personally doubt that Illyria could be killed in the Battle against the Black Thorn or a retaliation by the Senior Partners. Maybe a flash back later, explaining what happended to Illyria or if she joined the 'Dark Side'. Hope you update soon. Wished that you would add a flashback to Dawn saving Xander's life, too many stories enforce Dawn being whinny and weak compared to everyone else in the Buffy series. Most people don't even count that Dawn is between 13 and 15 years old from the time she first appears in Season 6 to the end of Season 7. Anyways loved it hope you continue the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your reviews and suggestions.

Dawn was 16 in season 7 so I supposed she must be 17 and a half by May 2004, this makes her being Gunn's girlfriend non squicky I hope, because Gunn is 25. But hey, the world was falling to pieces around everyone.
Review By [Cali] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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