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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Ramenth
Review:
Seems like a good story so far; but I'm pretty confused by alot of the names. Are these the ones used in the english translation?
Comments from author:
Character names or jutsu names? Cos with the jutsu names I went for original japanese versions, and character names I went with English translations
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [20 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Skoellya
Review:
Hey, sorry for not reviewing earlier,

This seems to have a well put together plot, which I'd really like to see more of. And I do want to see Kakashi- and his Icha Icha- introduced. I think you might need to work a little on the introduction of the other characters- considering everyone was looking for Naruto he doesn't get to say much and there isn't a kind of "oh, there he is," character moment for the searching teams which would make it a bit easier to follow. Bit dubious about the extra Uchiha but altogether good work and keep it up!
Review By [Skoellya] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Skoellya
Review:
This is really an excellent start. I'm always suspicious of OCs ans you've done a good job of making them not flat characters. Spike, as one of my favourite vamp with a soul, was a pleasant surprise as I was reluctant to read this as I wasn't sure how many Buffy characters would be directly involved with what the OCs get up to (You could maybe write a more concise summary) I'm looking forward to how you bring in the Naruto guys and gals (and finding out how this will fit into whats happening in their world) and also wondering if a certain Kakashi Hatake will make an appearance (no biggie if he doesn't, he's just a personal fav)

Just to ask: how many Buffy/Angel characters do you plan on involving? And I'm assuming Gaara might make an appearance with the sand? It's still a little early in the plot but it seems to be very focused so far and makes sense in the wacky was sci-fi fantasy does... keep writing.
Comments from author:
Yey, feedback! Sorry about the delay, a combination of computer failure and a two week holiday abroad has kept me away, but I wil post more soon.

To answer your questions:
1.) Don't count ANYONE out, Buffy, Naruto or Devil May Cry. I often find the advantage of fanfics is that you can have a lot of cameos and short appearences because the author doesn't need to introduce their character fully.
2.) Spike is my favourite Buffy character and a lot of fics on here bash him quite a bit. So I thought I'd stick up for him and make him very plot-centric.
3.) Being my favourite Naruto character also, Mr. Hatake will not only being appearing, but playing a very vital role in the story to come.
4.) Gaara will be making an appearence also, but not quite yet. Keep your eyes peeled for hints as to his impending appearence.

Finaly, I would like to note that this first story is the tip of the iceberg. It all blew up to a huge scale when I stated writing. and I am determined to finish it. Thanks for your comments, and enjoy, I will have a lot more posted soon :D
Review By [Skoellya] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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