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Review of chapter "Three" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful. I look forward to seeing how everyone reacts to what Xander did, and the ramifications to what he did are.
Review By [twlight] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from DieselDriver
Review:
Dang! Here's another one... "Hey guys, Ares the Olympian god of WAR has been hound members of my family to be his champion."

Perhaps this is what you meant to type? "Hey guys, Ares the Olympian god of WAR, has been hounding members of my family to be his champion for ages."

Or perhaps this: "Hey guys, Ares the Olympian god of WAR, has always bound members of my family to be his champion."

What did you mean?

Where's the rest of the story. You can't just abandon it? There's way to many unfinished stories here on this site and this is one of the better ones so far.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DieselDriver
Review:
What??? - "He fights for the projection hellmouth."??? Maybe it was a typo in the first chapter because this sentence at the end of the second one sure doesn't make any sense unless you meant to type "He fights for the protection from the hellmouth." or something like that. Although that's pretty awkward, at least it makes sense.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Review:
Heh! When I first read that last line I misread it as "Why am I dressed as a cross..."

Good so far. Looking forward to getting back to it but I thought that was amusing... Unless you actually mistyped it the way it is.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting take on this. Will there be more eventually or is this it?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing.. should be fun.. I'd love to read more! :D
Congrats and kudos!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [18 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from Genuka
Review:
Ouch! Burn the oracles! Wonder what's gonna happen next?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from edward
Review:
good story.
please update soon.
Review By [edward] • Date [29 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from animefangirl
Review:
i really like this story ... i hope you update soon :}
Review By [animefangirl] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
*cackles gleefully* I love it! I love Ares! He's so cool! I worship him! He so rules! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from darkmagician
Review:
Aside from a few grammatical and spelling errors, you're doing great. I love when Ares compares Spike to Gabrielle.
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [2 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from SwedishFrog
Review:
Really liked it !! But I refuse to search Ares temple for he rest of this fic, I refuse! Who knows what beasts he´s got hidden?
Oh Hell.....*sigh*...........Can someone point me the way to his temple so I can search for the rest of this fic? *LOL* Oh and Happy Halloween!
Review By [SwedishFrog] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from KatieKat
Review:
good story more please *smiles cutely*
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [25 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from MistDragon
Review:
I love this story. It is good to see it updated. Thank you, MD.
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [25 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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