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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
I just read the first story in the series , and the first chapter of this second story. I love the Idea of Lex and Clark together, and having Lex in the know about everything alien and weird. The X-Men cometh!! And it looks like the meteor teens really want Jean to goeth! They really hate her guts! This is a fun start to the second story. I hope it is updated soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [kayron] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Is good.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
So, why were you quarantined? This is a good story that a lot more people would like if it wasn't blocked. Fix it, so more people will tell you how wonderful it is.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Just a ratio problem that should be rectified with my next update.
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [24 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from feynstrom
Review:
Interesting variation on the theme and good call on the telepathy bit.
Comments from author:
thanks.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
I tried to read this, but your dislike of Jean made the whole think a bad joke. If you can't write objectively about someone else's creation, then its best to just leave them out of your story.
Comments from author:
That's what's warnings are for. So people who don't like when their favorite chars are insulted know to move on right away. And I didn't actually do anything to Jean. Everyone disliked her at first sight for poking into their heads. As a human being even an enhanced one she reacted. I mentioned my dislike as most people like her and no one ever seems bothered by her mind reading whenever she pleases. I gave what I felt was a realistic reaction for the group I created. I neither made her dumb, weaker, or anything else. I simply had people dislike the invasion of privacy. This incarnation of Jean Grey is 19 and prone to tantrums, anger, and abuse of her powers to get answers how she sees fit.

Let's not even mention the fact that the story is listed as comedy for a reason.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [14 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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