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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Nice to see the development of Cassie's hunting style over time, getting more methodical as she went. Of course she was being a bit stupid at the start :(
The story is a bit simplistic in its treatment of the first meeting with the scoobies but there is only so much you can do in a short chapter. I wonder how Cassie will convince Sam to send her to a school in Cleveland?
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. She was stupid to start but like most kids her age she would think herself invincible expecially with her mothers death.

Yeah, the meeting of the scoobies with Cassie is a bit simple but I wanted the focus on Cassie and the fact that she feels confident in her abilities. She wants to be treated as an equal to them, while she doen't know alot about where the abilities came from yet, I don't think she will conform to them at all with her hunting, she'll only do so when it suits her. It'll drive Buffy mad of course.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
An excellent, believable beginning. It's nice to see that the Scoobies aren't freaking about Cassie being an alien. I'm looking forward to seeing how you integrate the rest of the 'Gateverse into the Buffyverse. Please do continue with this, I would seriously enjoy reading it!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [6 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very nice, and I'd love to see more follow-ups to this story.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RoiDanton
Review:
I like the story very much and would like to read more of Cassie in the future.

Bye
Mike
Review By [RoiDanton] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Very new way of them meeting Cassie. Will patiently await more.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [15 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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