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Review of chapter "5" from SaraB
Review:
Very nice. I enjoyed reading this.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading!
Review By [SaraB] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
LOL! I loved the Wolverine cookies at the end. Nice touch! I very much enjoyed this entire story, thank you for sharing it. :-)
Comments from author:
:0)
Thanks
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [10 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from hyssop
Review:
Does it make me a bad person if I say that I loved seeing both Ronon and Rodney freaking out? I especially loved the Wolverine gingerbread cookies at the end! Happy that your muse survived, and you finished this. :)
Comments from author:
Nope, for if I agreed what would that make me for torturing those poor fellas...
Glad you liked it.
H_K
Review By [hyssop] • Date [3 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Ta
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from Suzanne
Review:
I love the ever protective Ronon.... Nobody and Nothing is going to hurt her if he can help it.
Great update:)
Comments from author:
Not too much?
Thanks for reading ;0)
Review By [Suzanne] • Date [3 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from RevDorothyL
Review:
A very satisfying conclusion! Nice work!
Comments from author:
Thanks good to know at least some stuck with it :0)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from Suzanne
Review:
Yea! another update. Oh boy, Willow doesn't feel so good... thats so not good.
Comments from author:
Can't help but feel bad about my tendancy to Willow bash, but where the muse takes me......
Review By [Suzanne] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from Shezzi
Review:
Yay! Update! thank you! This is really fun...I like Rodney's response to Willow trying to contact him, that is so in character! please update soon! love xx Shezzi
Comments from author:
Poor guy, the paranoia's gonna knock years of his life ;0)
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Suzanne
Review:
I really enjoy reading this story. I love how worried Ronon is about Willow. When Willow gets to safety, you can bet Ronon will be her shadow from now on...:)
Comments from author:
Oh yeah, he'd be hell to live with ;0)
Review By [Suzanne] • Date [14 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I like it!
Comments from author:
glad to hear it :0)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [13 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from hyssop
Review:
My first thought was, "Well don't stop now!" I think I got a little too involved there..;) Seriously, you've got some great characterizations going. I love how Shepherd likes to yank Rodney's chain where Willow is concerned! The whole series of stories is just so well-crafted. Love it!
Comments from author:
Good timing, just posted the next chap.
Thanks H-K
Review By [hyssop] • Date [11 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Your writing style is sooo, smooth is almost the right word. Seamless? I don't know, but I am loving your universe and hope you do more soon.

You do realize that you need to get them out of this mess, SOON!

James
Comments from author:
RL sucking ass, muses taking advantage and slacking.... or is it just me?
;0)
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [4 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Fun cliffhanger :)

Huh, I wonder how SG-A is going to react to what's happening on the mainland.
Comments from author:
Working on it honest :0)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Yay, a new chapter! *does happy dance*

Oh, MAN! Bad cliffie! Which, of course, means it's very good. I hope you update this again soon, because I'm well and truly hooked on these Willow in Pegasus Galaxy stories of yours.

Also, just one itty thing: you've got Ronon spelled Ronan about half of the time. I find myself doing that a lot, so I wind up using the 'find and replace' function of my word processor. ;-)

Thanks muchlies for sharing this!
Comments from author:
Can't train myself out of typing Ronan as I go, thought I'd fixed all the buggers this time. Edit, edit edit :0)
Thanks for the review, I'm working on it I promise!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [19 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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