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Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from bradsan
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How can you resist so many good reviews. Okay you can, but please consider an update. please
Review By [bradsan] • Date [5 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from Luhh
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I really hope you are planing on continuing this story. Aside from the fact that is kind of bugging me that Buffy haven't exploded yet with all the lies and the weak facet that she is demonstrating, so unlike her, i am loving all of it. Your story and the way you write is knew and refreshing and I'm really looking ford to read more of it. Well, good luck with the rest, I'll be waiting =D ;*
Review By [Luhh] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from FireWolfe
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love to see more
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from nightshadowlife
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wow! I am totally caught up in your story and can't wait to see the next chapter! BC that was a really sad tone at the end!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
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Nice can't wait for more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [17 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from GypsyDruid
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don't kill Joy. Pleaaaaase!
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Frardowin
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I am glad you updated this. If you hadn't I would never have found it.

That said I am enjoying the story so far and hope you update it soon.
Review By [Frardowin] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from alexceasar
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Very interesting. And how does Ollivander know she looks like her father? Who is her father? What is wrong with Joy? What is everyone hiding? I look forward to finding out. Good work.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from MistofRainbows
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Sigh, you're characterizations make me want to shoot someone in the knees. Your grammar is questionable in places, you use the wrong version of words more than I would like. Your descriptions are nice, sadly there are so many damn logic issues it's painful to read. Oh please, like Buffy is going to put up with the shit, and Joy is so out of character I'm surprised you didn't just have her adopted rather than have her Joy and Sirius's kid. As for Giles being missing, some how I really can't see them tracking someone across the ocean and into the hellmouth. The magic would be screwy the death eaters know shit about muggle things for tracking people and honestly it's just... never mind.

There is also the what the hell just ignore book six, some warnings would be good for the record. Also the little fact that Snape should be DEAD if he didn't kill Dumblefore. Or did you miss the unbreakable oath at the start of the 6th book?

Sigh, I also can't really see her just going along with the no calling friends bit. Good luck with the story though.
Comments from author:
Well I must say I'm not surprised about the grammar mistakes. It will be corrected by my beta soon enough I hope.
The other things like the characters, the "omissions", or the plot in general...if you don't like them, then I'm sorry but you will have to find another one that suits your expectations or even write one yourself.
That's the beautiful thing about fanfiction... you can do whatever you like. However I would like to remind you that this is a cross-over... which takes us even farther apart from the original series.
Anyway, thank you for your opinion.
I will have the grammatic/spelling/phrasing problem fixed.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from AllenPitt
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could being a slayer give Buffy partial immunity to the 'family disease'? though I suppose her life expectancy is so low as it is, it won't matter.
I'm still hoping Giles is alive--he's been tortured by Angelus, he's pretty tough. Might be fun if Spike & Drusilla are in England....
Comments from author:
Lol. You know I can't answer all of those questions or petitions!
I promise to answer them in the future!
Thanks for sticking by!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so long yet lost uncle" from VillageOrchid
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Good to see more of this story. I'd like to see Buffy do more than sit in a room. Giles probably needs to be saved... or at least telephoned from a public phone.
Comments from author:
Soon!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It can always get worse" from overK
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I can barely stand reading the parts with Buffy's mother. Honestly, what a controlling b*. I feel like Buffy is playing the part of the submissive in this story and it drives me nuts, so unlike her true character. But all in all, good story.
Review By [overK] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It can always get worse" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
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This story is really good. More please??
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [22 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It can always get worse" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
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Awesome update!! So because Ollivander knew who Buffy was and saw right through the disguise, I take it to mean that Hank is not Buffys father? I had a feeling he was not with all the secrecy and the prophecy and all. Will we be finding out just what this prophecy is and what it says soon? And who Buffys real father is? Please don't make us wait too long!! I absolutely can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work :)
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Weirdly enough I like Ollivander, he is very cryptic. You never know where he stands. And he's creepy enough. Lol.
Now, would you really like to know now who's Buffy's father. I would ruin everything by telling you all! You have to wait some chaps to know. But if you want to guess, I won't stop you!
Thank you again
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The censured confession" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
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Great chapter. I really can't wait to find out what this secret of Joyce's is and how it involves Buffy. I hope you don't make us wait to long for the next chapter and the BIG secret! Keep up the great work :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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