“I knew that was Jenny. Why would we need help from—” Dean said before looking at the last photo. “Son of a bitch.” ‘By the way we killed the Drayith Friday night’ It was a picture of Jordy and Jenny playing soccer with the Drayith’s head.
Hahahahahah!!!! Thanks for the giggles and laughs cuz I really needed that right now.
Review By [SwedishFrog] • Date [12 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Nice sequel And the last line was just great! It's just a little distracting to read "Daniel" instead of Oz, and a little more descriptions at times would be nice Everything else was really good
deliquate (not native english speaker)
Comments from author:
Yeah I know what you mean about the Daniel thing I had to keep fixing it when i wrote Oz but I had to tie it up with the photo and the photo said Daniel
thanks for the review
Review By [deliquate] • Date [19 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]