Yay, I am glad that I found this story again and I am glad that I finally figured out why I had trouble finding this story and the key words I needed to use to be able to find this story. Hopefully the next time I searches for this story again I will remember to use the correct key words as it will save me a lot of frustration.
The key words which enabled me to to find this story again were: tthfanfic xander victorian "baby clothes"
Anyway I have finished rereading this story once again and I really hope that you one day will get inspired add more chapters to this story.
::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Imperial Cheese Pie::
# = # = # = # = # = # = # Neither fire nor wind, birth nor death can erase our good deeds. - Buddha # = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Cool story till that little speech at the end. If the rest of your chapters are 80% gold and 20% crap then i guess it'll be a fun read. You just gotta be careful of the crap though.. sure it's worth digging through some poop to get to the gold but doesn't mean its enjoyable.
Review By [Downery] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Wow...have to say that this first chapter sucked so much that I was left with a WTF expression. Total Fail as a crossover trying to portray someone like Xander as being a though guy.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Awesome! I can't get enough of people ripping the goody-two-shoes another one. The Authority is a lot better, though it still gets boring and repetetive after the third story where they go around whopping everybody's asses as the world plummets toward certain doom, yet again.
Great fic, even though the romance feels a bit cheap. More on his interaction with da gal, less on the whole "oh, how I finally feel that wonderful feeling agai- no bad thought! Must not, yet I want, but no, I-" Because that's just cheesy and boring. Still plenty good, especially liked how he ripped bats another one. I remember reading about the original bat, he apparently carried a gun (not tranq, not 'stun ray', a real, shoot-hit-kill gun!) for dealing with bad guys. Then, it wasn't PC any more...
Review By [LordSia] • Date [10 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
very interesting story mate and who knows maybe xanders speach to the spandex crowd would actually get thru and cant wait to see how xander handles the golem i mean darkside. :D
Review By [darthridian] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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