ps: have you ever had a cat try and help you type? Patches likes to smack the keyboard when he's sitting in my lap. and he drools *eww*
Comments from author:
Funny you should say that, Harry the schizo-cat, was walking all over my laptop at various points last night. Don't tell me I'm gonna have to go in and do an edit? *groan, hits head on kitchen table*
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [12 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This chapter is quite a bit better than the last one, good job. Can't wait to see the Scoobies reactions, I would think that they would jump to the conclusion that Jesse is the first, but who knows.
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [21 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Great premise! I'm looking forward to seeing how you mix these characters together. Is he going to be allowed to tell the Scoobies what happened to him, since SGC and the new Council appear to be working together on this?
Comments from author:
Do you really think that Xander and Willow wouldn't get the truth out of him in the end? Can we say "and the shit hits the fan?", well I know I can anyway.
Now that is what I call "jump to the chase." You gave us just enough information to follow. I hope you do some flashbacks or memories to Jessie's life among the Abdonians. Going good. Looking forward to seeing what else you do with this.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Aug 07] • Not Rated
This is a very cool premise! I love Jesse and he was SO shafted by getting killed in the first episodes and then never being spoken of again. I would love to see more of this and eventually, see Jesse and Xander and Willow find each other again.
Review By [SusanAnthony] • Date [20 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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