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Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Haunting is definitely the word I would use to describe this ficlet. It's beautiful and of all of your wonderful stories, the one that cries out most for a sequel. I hope you're inclined to write one some day, even just having Radek run into Dawn when he's on Earth, because I would dearly love to read it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from TonyTheJew
Review:
Great story would Love to see another chapter to this where Dawn goes to Atlantis. You know what is up with Dawn Keyness never come up after the whole Hell-Goddess
Review By [TonyTheJew] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from Rivulet
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This was amazingly beautiful.
Review By [Rivulet] • Date [4 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Woot!!! I must go catch up on the blogging world, I really must.

Zelenka rocks.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from Sadie
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Absolutely fascinating.
Review By [Sadie] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from NutsContract
Review:
Um... wow, this is interesting. The comparison of Dawn and Atlantis.. um, just wow. It's not exactly what I expected when I read the summary, but...wow. Sorry, I keep repeating myself but I really don't know what else to see. This is certainly different in terms of a Dawn-centered fanfic, and I liked it. Keep up with the unconventional-ness.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [21 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from (Recent Donor)kribby
Review:
So... if Dawn is the ghost in the machine (and she isn't dead), then what is she the key to? Will she ever visit Atlantis and... uh... unlock something?
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [21 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from RevDorothyL
Review:
This is really charming and surprising -- not that I'm surprised to discover Zelenka can be charming as the focus of a story (personally, I think he's sort of adorable), but surprising in the sense that Dawn is present to him in the city in only a spiritual and poetic sense, and (okay, maybe I SHOULDN'T be surprised at this) that he has the artistic temperament to accept senses he can't scientifically measure and not worry about meaningless distinctions when it comes to the entity that is Atlantis.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from AngelaM
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Interesting use of a secondary character. So did she seem familure because of some sort of connection to the Ancients?
Review By [AngelaM] • Date [21 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ghost in the Machine" from angrymonkey
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This was a really interesting story, I like the look into Zelenka's mind.
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [21 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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