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Millennium Man: Book 1-Battle-City, The Beginning

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Review of chapter "Chapter 8b- On Angel's Wings..." from Harry
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Illyria. You brought in ILLYRIA to deal with the problem that Dawn is facing!?! *Dons mystic armor* If this OLD ONE is looking for a fight, she is going to get it!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a - The Games Kid's Play..." from Harry
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And so, they virtual dueling game has begun. And its going to take, if you do it like the show, a combination of the Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon *I own a copy of that card) as well as the Black Luster Solider to form the Dragon Master Knight (Own both of those as well!) to take out the 5 headed Dragon !( Another Card that I own!) Now, lets see how things are going with the Slayer and their group!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8b- On Angel's Wings..." from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8b- On Angel's Wings..." from Bobboky
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good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a - The Games Kid's Play..." from Vilkath
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Always good to see an update to a story after having to waiting for a while. Though I am a bit disapointed the chapter was basicaly a rehash of canon yugioh events without even the smallest hint of Xander or anything new to the story.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7- Of Old Friends and New Powers..." from AkashaDrake
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Smooth move, Xandman. Don't you know better than to mix similar magics from different lands? No telling what will happen next.

Of course, I would love to see that the Key unlocked the power of the Key.
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [16 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7- Of Old Friends and New Powers..." from Robby
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Awesome story!!!!! Can't wait to see what happened to Dawn! Or Xander dueling!
Review By [Robby] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7- Of Old Friends and New Powers..." from Vilkath
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Not a bad story and definitely a step up from most Yugioh cross overs I have read before, they rarely work well. Usually the cross over characters just follow Yuugi around, play Duel monsters and do nothing really constructive. So on that front this story is doing pretty well, on the other hand I do think the plot is a bit confusing with tons of characters I am not entirely sure I understand and several chapters focused on characters other than Xander. I would almost say the strange powered demons I can't even place had more of a introduction then Xander did.

I don't know if romance is any part of the fic but I do kind hope Xander gets hooked up with either Izisue (sp?) or Anzu/Tea. Both nice, incredibly hot girls from the Yuugioh time frame this story is set in and both relatively 'free' romantically. Sure Anzu has a crush of sorts on the Pharaoh's soul, but considering he has no real memories, personalty, and leaves her at end the series to the after life without a second thought it's a pretty shallow crush doomed to failure. The Yuugi/Tea pairing imo is pretty undeveloped as well and GX series goes onto prove Yuugi seems have no real sex drive and content play games and ignore the girls around him beyond the 'friend level.

As for Izisue, she's hot, unattached, sheltered and I could see her looking to Xander for help with her brother over Kaiba. If her foresight powers are worth anything Xander has the better track record for helping people then the rich boy.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [1 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7- Of Old Friends and New Powers..." from Harry
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Its good to see you back on this story. And, its good to see that you are giving us the option of seeing both the Japanese names as well as the English names of the charachters. Now, lets see how one Key reacts to another KEY!
Review By [Harry] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7- Of Old Friends and New Powers..." from slytherinwithwings
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IT'S ALIVE! IT'S ALIVE!
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [31 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6- Discussions and Dreams..." from MiraniEmrysAnduin
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This is awsome!!!!! I haven't been able to find many Buffy/Yu-Gi-Oh crossovers. I LOVE Xander havign a Millenium item!!!!! It's a great idea!
What'll Xander's deck be like? I'd say taht he'd be best suited to dragon cards but that's just my opinion. I'm a little confused b the last chapter but I'll get over it.
Will you PLEASE update soon!!!!! I REALLY wanna know what's gunna happen in the next chapter and I cant' know that untill you update so PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!! Pretty please with sugar, ice-cream, chocolate, strawberries and sprinkles on top!!!!! I'll even add Twinkies if it helps! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [12 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6- Discussions and Dreams..." from redhandgrunt
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Pretty good story. I hope you come back to it some time. How did Shadi Get into Yugi's mind if Xander has the Key?
Review By [redhandgrunt] • Date [30 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6- Discussions and Dreams..." from Harry
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Sounds like Merrick and Odin are about to make an appearance. As to the being with the three parts, I have no idea who or what that was! But, I think that Xander had best build his deck and soon. Its going to be TIME TO DUEL and soon!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5- A Boy and his Yami..." from Harry
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I do admit, I am more familiar with the Anime than the Manga when it comes to Yugioh, but still, there are some things that Shadi will reveal in time. And I suspect that we have NOT seen the last of Ryo or Bakura or even Zorc!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4- When in Egypt..." from Harry
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OK. Some pointers that might help out in the future. If Xander draws a green card, that is a spell card. If its a pink card, then its a trap card. Yellow cards are monster cards, unless they are purple, in which case those are Fusion cards. You fuse two or more monsters together to create the monster on the card. And it sounds like Xander is going to need a lot of tutoring if he is going to build his deck. I would suggest, maybe a Fire or Wood deck, maybe even a Winged Beast deck. ITS TIME TO DUEL!!!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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