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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)

Review:

Ahhhhh, I wanted more. what will Dawn do, How will she change things, what will happen to Neo,Trinity and the others because of it, and will she bring the scoobies back. more I want more Whaaah.

Review By [ (Recent Donor)

christytrekkie] • Date [29 May 09] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid

Review:

I was generally disappointed with the second Matrix movie - so I found myself liking your alternative -- but still a little sad and poingnet answer.

Comments from author:

Yeah, the second Matrix movie didn't do it for me (and the third was even worse). Glad you liked it!

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jan 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)

halfbloodpuffskin

Review:

ooh, I liked that. Not that I'd watch the last Matrix or anything (the second one ruined it for me, even if the Twins were pretty cool). Great premise, and a bored Dawn suddenly sprung is always good.

But tell me; when she was captured, it was Tuesday, right?

ed: lol, thanks, glad to make life a little better!

Comments from author:

I'm glad you liked it. For me, the Twins made the second movie bearable. And your comment about it being Tuesday has been lauded by myself and others as the height of witty one-liners. That right there made my day.

And yes, it was a Tuesday.

Review By [ (Past Donor)

halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [27 Aug 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Moondragon

Review:

Awesome! And really obvious when you think about it, a key maker needs to have made a key:) It also works really well with Buffy as the first 'one', and the whole apocalypse/reboot parallel.

Are you considering writing a sequel? Because I would love to read about Neo and company meeting Dawn, she'll confuse the hell out of them!

Comments from author:

You know, the first thing I thought bout when watching that part of the movie was, "hey, keymaker. Makes keys. Dawn's a key. Ooooh, plot bunny!" Yes, my mind works in strange associative patterns, but whatever. Yes, I am considering a sequel, but I'm not sure what it'd be. We'll see. I haven't watched the 3rd matrix recently, so I may have to wait until then to get ideas...

Review By [Moondragon] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IceWing

Review:

Good story... Quite liked it... Would be interesting to see what would happen if the storyline were to continue...

Comments from author:

Thanks, Ice Wing. I'm interested in the continuation of this little storyline as well, so there may be more coming later.

Review By [IceWing] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)

Snag

Review:

Sign me up for others that'd like to see a little more Dawn the Key mayhem! Fun stuff.

Also:

>
>But tell me; when she was captured, it was Tuesday, right?
>

The writer of this statement wins both the Matrix and the Hellmouth.

Comments from author:

Thanks, Snag! Dawn the Key, using her amazing green-ness, now that's just fun. And yes, that person is a witty genius.

Review By [ (Past Donor)

Snag] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Drix

Review:

I really enjoyed it, it would be interesting to see if you could expand it. i always love stories about Dawn.

Comments from author:

Thanks, Drix. I'm glad you liked it and there may be more coming up. Dawn stories *are* the best.

Review By [Drix] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from foreverdead

Review:

This is good, you should write more.

Comments from author:

Thanks, foreverdead. I'll try to continue this storyline, as apparently everyone loves it.

Review By [foreverdead] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Preaphis

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Nice, new, I'd almost call it "foamy". Hoping against hope more story will show up :)

Comments from author:

"foamy"??? That's a .... new adjective. I'd prefer "shiny", even if it does have Firefly connotations. But yes, I do think this is a rather original story idea.

Review By [Preaphis] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EllandrahSylver

Review:

Very interesting. I'll be following this fic with a close eye. I haven't seen anything even remotely like this before, and it's fascinating. I look forward to more.

Comments from author:

Thanks! I tried to go way out into left field when writing this. Of course, it ended up sounding like something out of one of my cyberpunk novels... which is good, because I love those books dearly. If you like this, I suggest you read "Neuromancer", by William Gibson, and "Snow Crash", by Neal Stephenson.

Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Satori

Review:

Dawn's "hmnp! men!" commentary was laughtatsic.

Comments from author:

Yes, yes it was.

Review By [Satori] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngusH

Review:

This is a very nice story. Clever and well told, plus I always like Dawn out of series stories and there definitely aren't enough matrix crossovers.

Comments from author:

Thanks. I tried to go for something shiny and new.

Review By [AngusH] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Arekanderu

Review:

Nice one.Woudl this make Cordelia the very first Oracle?

Comments from author:

I hadn't thought of that....

^.^

I am *totally* going to use that idea in the next one. Thanks!

Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oranda

Review:

Very cool. I always thought that the Twins were pretty neat. Glad to see them again. I hope that you decide to do more with this story, it seems like and interesting idea. Good luck to you.

Comments from author:

Oranda, thanks for the review. Yes, I heart the Twins and I was saddened to see them lose against Neo. I'll try to continue this storyline, but I make no promises.

Review By [Oranda] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrushedRosez

Review:

I really liked it. Original idea, good execution. Great charcterization. I would love to see more in the Matrix/Slayer world.

Comments from author:

Thanks, TimeShifter. I tried to create a story that was really original. Soo many people stick to the same plotlines; I wanted something a little different. This is my first time writing Dawn as well; I'm glad you think I did well.

Review By [CrushedRosez] • Date [23 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]