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Review of chapter "Part Twenty-nine & Thirty" from breve
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this is a fantastic story.
i love this version of willow.
and to give her faith, instead of one of the obvious other choices, inspired!
Review By [breve] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Six" from breve
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this might just be the best fanfic i have ever read.
and i'm only 6 chapters in.
thanks for writing this, it's tragically beautiful, and really well written
Review By [breve] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from breve
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my eyes are teary.
i always get that way when i read stories about the hellmouth opening and everyone dying.
can't wait to read more of this.
stargate crossovers are just about my favourite kind.
Review By [breve] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Twenty-nine & Thirty" from deathgeonous
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Very interesting. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Twenty-nine & Thirty" from SEAborg
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Quite an interesting story. Making Faith a Tok'ra was one of the better, and more interesting overall, events in the story. And it was all nicely written.

Well done.
Review By [SEAborg] • Date [4 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Twenty-nine & Thirty" from pezgirl
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Awesome chapter!

I love the Kyanna/Faith blending subplot; especially Kyanna's line-

** "I no longer pledge my allegiance to the Tok'ra, I will now serve Willow, therefore I am no longer bound by the Tok'ra alliance," Kyanna paused, listening. "My host wishes me to invite you to bite us." **

Excellent :D

I like your original characters Zack and Tyler; Willow compared them to Angel and Spike...bad images, very bad images :)

If my memory's right the SGC/Willow alliance doesn't go to well...

I'm off to read part 2 :)
Review By [pezgirl] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Eight" from jimk
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You know, in a normal world, as this one is portrayed, you don't attack someone and hold a knife to their neck or freak out just because they hid a couple of swords in your house. Just saying.
Review By [jimk] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Twenty-nine & Thirty" from serenityselena
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this is one hell of a story ....
poor Willow .... it sure isn`t easy for her now ...
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Twenty-nine & Thirty" from lucyferr
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"You regret that you pissed Willow off so much that she threatened to level the mountain, not what you did to her. You don't give a damn about either one of us. All you care about is Willow's magic. You want her to teach the blonde bitch how to use magic…. NOT going to happen...No. I won't let you. There is no way you're going to blackmail Red into an alliance because you saved my life. They were the ones who endangered it in the first place. Besides, Ky would be dead if I wasn't here so it's kind of a fair trade."

ducks this is fun!

** "I no longer pledge my allegiance to the Tok'ra, I will now serve Willow, therefore I am no longer bound by the Tok'ra alliance," Kyanna paused, listening. "My host wishes me to invite you to bite us." **

lol!

"No. You will never have access to my magic, there will be no tests, Faith and I are not staying here. I don't think you understand the severity of the situation. I'm not asking you for an alliance for me. I don't give a fuck if I live or die...."No one is to EVER threaten Faith and I again. If I so much as hear of a Tok'ra, or human, threatening to use Faith as a bargaining chip to blackmail me...These scars are nothing. If I had a choice between memories, and scars, I would take the scars.

Love her negotiating tactics - so nice to see the American military in a negotiation where they aren't the biggest kid in the playground. Kinda like Rome when the Barbarians turned up.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twenty seven & Twenty eight" from lucyferr
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"Visualise the SGC, the embarkation room. Picture it in your mind."
He could do that.
"Now click your heels together three times and say `There's no place like home'."
...
"It really wasn't that funny," Jack repeated.
Willow broke into renewed fits of laughter. His face! God! She couldn't believe he had actually fallen for that!

lol!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Twenty One & Twenty two" from lucyferr
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Super Willow is major league awesome!

"Fuck you, Jack. I'm not military."

Daniel finally standing up against 'military intelligence' is also awesome. But minor league.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Nineteen & Twenty" from lucyferr
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"No one's going to die? You guys couldn't even kill a single demon between the sixteen of you. If I hadn't come along, you would be dead and so would everyone else...You didn't think to ask me? Or maybe get to know me a little? A little overkill for one little word isn't it? You made everyone think there was a toxic spill in the building! For what? I didn't do anything but translate a damn word!...That gives you every right to go through my things and set off a chain of events that could destroy the remainder of the people I love.... I haven't had a lover since she died because of Glory...Well, General, since you like bugs so much…"

Love the way she tells them off! And destroying Daniel's romantic hopes since he now thinks she's les instead of bi
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Seventeen & Eighteen" from lucyferr
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Willow pulled another sword from the sheath on her back. She was now holding a sword in each hand. Could she actually fight with two swords?
Two swords? THE two swords. She had gotten them from the apartment. But how? Could she go invisible like Nirrti? God damn it! The General was not….
Wow.
Jack watched as Willow fought the demon with a skill that would make any Black Operative proud. ... swung the sword and decapitated the demon.
She stared at it for a long time, her face unreadable. Then she turned to him. "Colonel O'Neill, are you all right?"
He wasn't sure actually.

love ur description of jack's pov
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Nine" from lucyferr
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Awesome so far... enjoying Faith feeling guilty...
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Twenty-nine & Thirty" from robertlisle
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This is a really fantastic story, well thought out and nicely written. It has been a pleasure to read and I hope the next part of the series is as good as the first.
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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