As a fan of the Fifth Element movie, I must say I enjoyed the characterization of Leloo in this one. Leloo, Dawn and Illyria as the Way, the Truth and the Life IS a tad discomfiting, but makes perfect fan-sense ^_^. Good read!
Review By [stoplightgodess] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love this vision of Korben Dallas 'meeting the in-laws' in the form of Dawn and Illyria!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from NutsContract
Review:
Wow this is a good fic. I love how bratty Dawn is towards him...very cute. I think you should make a full-length story about the Fifth Element, I'd be very interested in reading it. But if you don't, I accept another Illyria and Dawn-centered fic... they're my fav. characters in the Buffyverse. :)
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Un-frakkin'-real. THIS is a superb example of what fan fiction is SUPPOSED to be, and a more ingenious melding I've not seen in years. To take two disparate items, find elements in both that can be meshed, and then find a focus to fit them together in such a way as to make it all seem so...NATURAL is something many strive for and too often fail to reach.
THIS story, however, manages to achieve that with a subtlety and feel of RIGHTness that most others just never get.
Well done.
Comments from author:
I just wanted to let you know, this comment really meant a lot to me. =)
I'm really glad you liked it.
Review By [Sithspit] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]