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Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Love the way your mind puts stuff together.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from stoplightgodess
Review:
As a fan of the Fifth Element movie, I must say I enjoyed the characterization of Leloo in this one. Leloo, Dawn and Illyria as the Way, the Truth and the Life IS a tad discomfiting, but makes perfect fan-sense ^_^. Good read!
Review By [stoplightgodess] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love this vision of Korben Dallas 'meeting the in-laws' in the form of Dawn and Illyria!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Review:
I like this muchly.
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [15 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Odd timeline thing, doesn't exactly feel right to me. Oh well.

Very cute scenes and dialog, though. Good idea with the colors/three theme :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked!

I checked canon dating over before writing this, but if you can find an actual oops, email me and I'll fix it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
What a fantastic idea! Wonderful, thank you.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [31 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Now this is different. And I very much enjoyed it, thank you! I hope you write more in this, because this was fun.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from amusewithaview
Review:
Bizarre, but good. I was intrigued and mildly confused (just like poor Dallas) but I enjoyed it all the same. Good stuff.

Danke
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from manic
Review:
It was nice to see Leeloo and Korben again! Interesting premise, thanks for sharing.
Review By [manic] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from NutsContract
Review:
Wow this is a good fic. I love how bratty Dawn is towards him...very cute. I think you should make a full-length story about the Fifth Element, I'd be very interested in reading it. But if you don't, I accept another Illyria and Dawn-centered fic... they're my fav. characters in the Buffyverse. :)
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Un-frakkin'-real.
THIS is a superb example of what fan fiction is SUPPOSED to be, and a more ingenious melding I've not seen in years. To take two disparate items, find elements in both that can be meshed, and then find a focus to fit them together in such a way as to make it all seem so...NATURAL is something many strive for and too often fail to reach.

THIS story, however, manages to achieve that with a subtlety and feel of RIGHTness that most others just never get.

Well done.
Comments from author:
I just wanted to let you know, this comment really meant a lot to me. =)

I'm really glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from Orion
Review:
nice story. I've not read much 5th element fan fiction, but this really captures Leeloo's personality, and Corbin's as well. very well written.
Review By [Orion] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from Faleoh
Review:
Very good!
Review By [Faleoh] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Refracted Light" from AngusH
Review:
It's wonderful.

I love the whole thing very much.

Especially Dawn describing Glory as a minor goddess :-)
Review By [AngusH] • Date [30 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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